All Alone

a lonesome hermit

scours the beach for a new shell

no longer homeless





Rual's 'Journey' Haiku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 25, 2010 at 7:40 AM
Great take on the photo, Margaret! Congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, Carolyn
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April 24, 2010 at 5:03 PM
Good one, Marg. Congratulations. Geeez, I think I really screwed up with this one. I didn't know if it was a snail or some kind of crab type animal. It seemed to have so many arms in the picture but the winning poem called it a snail. Luv, Andrea
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April 24, 2010 at 4:22 PM
Awesome perspective on the picture for a thought provoking poem. Congratulations on your third place finish in Raul's contest. Keep up the good writing. Karen
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April 24, 2010 at 2:08 PM
Happy snail Congrats on your win Margaret
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April 24, 2010 at 1:39 PM
Congrats Margaret on your third place win in the Journey contest.. perfect words to feature the photo..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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April 24, 2010 at 1:36 PM
Wonderful, Maggie!! Congratulations on yor 2nd Place win in The Journey Contest!! Thanks for leaving kind comments for me...Love, Audrey
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April 24, 2010 at 1:27 PM
Margaret, congratulations on placing 3rd in my contest...Raul
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April 24, 2010 at 8:35 AM
Great work. Good luck in contest. I have been away a few days and contests have been launched and over in just that time. I am playing catch up. Thanks for your comments. Love, Joyce
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April 24, 2010 at 4:50 AM
if we look we will find, nice one
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