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All About a Donkey

Many years ago, Before yours or my time, When the only way to Travel to and fro Was not with automobiles, Or cars or trains, Or even planes. But with a horse or a donkey. This happened in the villages In Greece, donkeys were a Cheap mode of transport, But stubbornly would sit On their paunches and snarl Showing yellow teeth, There was no way, The donkey would budge Another step, on that day The aristocracy from Athens With horses, And their breeches and braces, Made fun of the peasants And donkeys, what monkeys! But one Athenian Stopped by the old Man with his donkey The poor donkey was saddled, With so much, His walking was wonky! Hey my friend, Said the city man, To the old peasant Would you sell me A pheasant, And your donkey Would he carry the same load for me? Of course he would but There is one thing you should know He don’t look so good! Said the honest old man! But the buyer ignored this And put a bridle On the poor animal, and Tied him with rope to his saddle! A week passed, and there Suddenly appeared the Athenian Who had bought the donkey. Hey mister he said, Did you know your donkey was blind, Yes, but told you, It was you who misunderstood “He don’t look so good!’

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Date: 3/6/2021 6:03:00 PM
Dear Jennifer, my lovely poetry sister, oh I have missed your wonderfully talented and entertaining pen. I love donkeys and I love your delightful old-world poem, full of warm "Jennifer" charm, with the very funny twist at the end. You never fail to make me smile. Your beautiful heart shines in the humor of this beguiling poem. Warmest wishes, love and hugs to you, my sweet friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/6/2021 7:16:00 AM
Jennifer : How funny. Like a skit from the Marx Brothers, I can see Chico delivering that line. Lol SuZ
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Date: 3/3/2021 5:33:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! Have you been consulting with Lindsay Laurie?! This is as superb a twist as even he comes up with! Just loved it,... those wonky donkeys! :) gw
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Date: 3/1/2021 3:54:00 PM
Hello Jennifer … a fanastic story Jennifer and I really felt for the donkey being overloaded, but the final line did bring on a smile because of the miscommunication - thanks again Jennifer - Lindsay
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Date: 2/27/2021 3:38:00 PM
Ha, what an ending to this delightful read Jennifer, entertaining and enjoyable. Belle
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Date: 2/27/2021 1:35:00 PM
What a story teller you are my friend--enjoyed the surprise ending, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/27/2021 12:03:00 PM
Excellent narrative poem, Jennifer, with a gotcha ending. Janice
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Date: 2/26/2021 6:31:00 PM
Love your storytelling, Jenn. This one has such a great surprise ending, it brought a smile. Also enjoy your rhymes such as peasant / pheasant and donkey / wonky. Another charming gem from your talented pen. Blessings and hugs ~ John
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Date: 2/26/2021 11:59:00 AM
Poor little donkey. I feel sorry for him and thn the old man shouldn't work him so hard. A good story though. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/26/2021 10:33:00 AM
Well, you pulled the rug right out from under us, Jennifer! I was not expecting the punch line at the end, but thoroughly enjoyed this story. Donkeys get a bad rap. I wouldn't mind going back to the days when people rode animals instead of driving cars. Enjoyed!! Hugs, carolyn
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Date: 2/26/2021 4:04:00 AM
You are indeed an excellent story teller my dear friend Jennifer. Loved it
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Date: 2/26/2021 4:01:00 AM
The end actually surprised me, when I started reading this one, another story came into my mind, when the donkeys used to sit deliberately in water, and the load they used to carry (salt, spices or sugar etc), would dissolve in water, and then they would walk weight-free. Then a man came up with solution, put cotton type thing on donkeys instead of salt bags. Thus donkey learnt a lesson cz the weight was not 4 times more than the original one, as cotton can store water... Lol
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Date: 2/25/2021 2:57:00 PM
A cute one.
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Date: 2/25/2021 11:18:00 AM
WoW! Jennifer, Good storytelling from start to finish. I was not expecting the ending. Excellent job. Have a wonderful day, my friend from across the pond:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/25/2021 12:16:00 PM
Hi Aleixis, you make my day every time I see your comment coming in - you are such an inspiration, and you have just beat me, I was going to visit you NOW Hugs and blessings, JENNIFER.!
Date: 2/25/2021 5:28:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this lovely poem, Jenny, especially the end twist. Anything to do with donkeys tickles my attention since, when I was very young, I had one for a companion on my grandfather's farm. Hope you are keeping well, my friend. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
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Date: 2/25/2021 3:26:00 AM
Simply loved the punchline. Enjoyed reading your story. Thanks for sharing. Take care, Rama
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Date: 2/24/2021 11:15:00 AM
Lol, love the punchline Jennifer, hope you are well. Tom
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Date: 2/24/2021 11:10:00 AM
Hello Jennifer, it is a buyer be ware message here. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs Darlene
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