Alive Until Dead

Can life whisper louder
 the past life ive left 
far behind?

Not even a question
 I need answered,
 that's standing in line...

Like a constant radio playing
 iin my head,
 it sings of all things 
instead I should've said..

Or maybe never telling you
 all that went thru my mind 
Things probably left
 better unsaid 
or with time..

.What was hidden
 In my head.
 every feeling felt
 every fear I thought then dead. 

The fear is now alive
 wreaking havoc in my head
Its ok tho I live until Im dead.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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August 5, 2016 at 10:37 PM
I think you show a lot of potential...
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July 16, 2016 at 12:26 AM
Kelsey, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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July 13, 2016 at 10:27 PM
Kelsey, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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