Michael J. Falotico Poet Tyburn

Alive and Fighting

~Alive and Fighting~

                                                  Dreaming
                                                  Screaming
                                                    Fighting
                                                     Writing
                                Dreaming in a world of dark writing.
                              Words screaming alive and still fighting.


For Dr. Rams Tyburn Contest....

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Elizabeth Wesley August 23, 2011 at 9:22 PM Love the way you twist those words into a great verse Michael. Hope you win with this one.

Dinda Minardi August 23, 2011 at 10:25 AM I like this, Michael. A lot! The two last lines showed efforts of unwritten idea.

Andrea Dietrich August 23, 2011 at 9:55 AM HI, Michael. I enjoyed this one. This form is very weird though (too restraining) and I saw that many poets were not doing it correctly from the examples I found online. I think someone needs to teach it in a blog or something!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 23, 2011 at 9:49 AM excellent expressions of the true writer's feelings Michael luv.. good luck in the contest.. this brilliant piece will top the charts luv... your W.K. is showing ..as your J.G. is enjoying it...luv..forever and always..