ALIVE

Seeing you makes me feel alive Being near you, anything I can survive But until your ready my feelings I hide Just know that i'm always down to ride I want to always make you smile Even if it takes me awhile I must walk on egg shells To bring you safely out of hell You've been hurt so much Its hard for you to trust I hope someday you'll see Tht you can truly, honestly trust me For now I'll sit and bide my time Till the day you allow me to call you mine I'll wait and just be your friend But I'll always love you till the end

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Ashley Gilchrist

Date: 7/18/2024 10:42:00 PM

Mikey, you have more talent then you realize. You are an amazing person and a Wonderful best Friend. I am so happy to see that you are putting your beautiful poetry on here. I enjoy reading all your poems they are all amazing and I am glad you've decided to share your experiences with the world. Remember you have a couple of gifts God gave you. You can write poetry and you can draw. I hope to see more of your work. I'm so proud of you Mikey. I love you as my best friend. Ashley Marie Gilchrist.

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/12/2024 6:46:00 AM

Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Benjamin Bartley

Date: 7/9/2024 8:53:00 PM

This would make a great Friendship or Hopeful Greeting card. Thanks for sharing.