Aliens

The subject of aliens is a big topic today Here's what I think for the record, I say Of course they exist At Walmart, catch my drift? Their invasion is surely already underway
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 7:53 PM
I drove by a Walmart this morn...I heard that's where Danny was born...a full head of hair...holding a cold beer...tis true on the funnies I've sworn
Malenfant Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 12:54 PM
This is not really a limerick, which have 3 feet of 3 syllables each in lines 1,2 and 5, and 2 feet of 3 syllables in lines 3 and 4, (with some wiggle room in the number of unstressed syllables). It's this form that give limericks their unique flow. How about instead: "The subject of aliens is big today./On the topic I have this to say:/ Of course they exist,/At Walmart they enlist;/Their invasion is well underway."
Smith Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 7:54 PM
sounds boring
Ellison Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 4:39 PM
Thanks my friend... much appreciated!!! Jack
Turner Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 12:12 PM
Walmart is where freaks hang out, losers go there to strikeout, I saw Tim there, in women's underwear, looking for sheep no doubt
Turner Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 9:15 PM
LOL
Smith Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 7:47 PM
it was really a hog in disguise...swooning in your soft eyes...snorting out loud...looking real proud...after finishing two burgers and fries
Ellison Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 4:38 PM
Are you sure it was Tim? lol Loved it... Jack
Flats Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 8:47 AM
Do you go to the Mart in disguise?//Shop incognito for buys?//despise the store//but buy way more//hang out with those alien spies? ROCK ON JACKSON!!!
Ellison Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 9:52 AM
We see some sights, don't we... up in Canada too! lol Have a great day my friend... Jackson xx
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