Aliens

ALIENS? From another planet? OR Another dimension? That thin scrim-of-mind strains to penetrate! The Master has counseled - “Many Mansions” Perhaps………….. all depends on developing-imagination Of………………. Coming out of body filtering through that thin scrim resting just back of the eyes Yes! Just back of the eyes but galaxies deep! “Go into your closet” counseled the Master Yes! that “closet” beyond the stars beyond physical need beyond fear beyond beyond That we see aliens might be proof proof that the window to beyond may be opened Are a few allowed to see to visit? What world undetected whirls around me as I write? ......................................................... For Carolyn Devonshire, my mystic friend.

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/21/2011 8:46:00 PM

Mystic secrets flit all through this verse Daver. Love how you weave the spiritual with man and all the heavenly descriptions. Beautiful verse my friend.

James Peranteau

Date: 5/2/2011 6:10:00 AM

Thought provoking write sir, you sure do have poetic flash dear poet...great write ! Have a great week Dave...much love, james

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/1/2011 9:58:00 PM

very intriguing questions you ask here Daver-yup, sometimes one just can't help but wonder.. oh btw, how are your eyes? I read somewhere you had some surgery done for cataracts? I hope all is well with you :) & thank you for your thought-provoking comments, I think it holds so much truth, that is a wise man speaking and so are you- that poem was inspired by the contest, made me realize how "when" can be the scariest question? but yes, sometimes it also depends on how we see it, hugs & thanks :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/1/2011 7:22:00 AM

The Master has all the answers Daver .. and all the solutions to all the problems... excelelnt presentation of a theme to ponder .. to me the aliens represent those who do not know HIM.. how sad for them.. they are missing so very much.. another brilliant piece of poetry from my creative friend luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/30/2011 9:20:00 PM

You are attracting me with your titles Daver,, aliens.. well they can get my imagination going.. especially there where abouts.. and if they are right in front of me... enjoyed,..p.d.

James Foulk

Date: 4/30/2011 4:11:00 PM

loved this one daver, brought a smile, a great write, very creative.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2011 4:08:00 PM

cool concept, Daver. what made you think of doing this? Are you seeing some little green men lately? All joking aside, I really ejoyed this and how you related it to God and man. Great reflective writing. LUv, Andrea

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 4/30/2011 2:20:00 PM

You definitely stimulate my mind and imagination, Daver! I suppose there are other "dimensions", but I don't feel that opening up a window, would be the right thing to do? But then again, for stuff like that, I'm cowardly. There is already lots of mystery and magic in the world, Daver. Birds, butterflies, fish, etc...that travel leagues to return to their birthplace. This is a super write, and one much enjoyed by me. Surely a mind probe!! God's blessings to you and yours! Love, Mikki

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/30/2011 7:19:00 AM

I believe in life from other planets as well as spirits dwelling in another dimension, Daver. Sometimes spirits of late loved ones seem to "visit," but I haven't seen the aliens yet. Is there room in that "closet" for both of us? We could talk about this in depth -- in fact, we have done so many times. Thanks for letting me know you posted it, dear. Always enjoy your work! Very thought-provoking poetry from you every time. This is particularly well done! Love, Carolyn