Alien Territory

alien territory
the visade is
mandatory- it's
easy to forget
underneath we
have let our
selves fade from
sight- just as
dawn swallows
night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 20, 2010 at 10:16 AM
Thank you for sharing your awesome poetry with us today Rachel. I enjoyed reading your writing this morning. I am hoping you have a wonderful weekend and find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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August 19, 2010 at 5:46 PM
don't go into the light!! Welcome to poetry soup and hope you find much inspriation to share with us here at the soup. Check out some of my writes if you feel adventuresome. :)
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