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Alien Sunset

Sitting here alone, where the grass is cobalt blue. On the edge of this alien world, and the sea is crimson - oh what a view! The evening is closing in fast. On the horizon comes the sunset - my heart it pounds. For you see the sun is of the brightest violet All shades of purple, I fall to the ground! The violet sun rays shine down on the sea, Of which is crimson and resembling glass I cry. I can't believe it. This is immense! All shades of colors having a blast. The sun has gone. I lay amongst the cobalt blue. I look up at the stars and think of home. I wonder if what I saw was true!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/26/2011 2:18:00 PM
Amazing!! very vivid description... I love it!
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Date: 8/23/2011 12:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Paula's "Not Just Any Sunset" contest Emma. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/21/2011 1:30:00 PM
Fantastic images and colours my eyes do see in your words Emma. Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest. have a lovely week ahead :)
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Date: 8/21/2011 11:50:00 AM
Congrats Emma on your super second place win with this excellent expressive poetry luv..
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Date: 8/21/2011 10:46:00 AM
lovely entry Emma, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 8/20/2011 5:38:00 PM
Great descriptions, great poem... well done on your victory
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Date: 8/20/2011 4:23:00 PM
Way to go Emma.. congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/20/2011 3:54:00 PM
hey Emma congrats on yoru win Dave
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Date: 8/20/2011 3:46:00 PM
Emma: Congratulations on your win in the Not Just Any Sunset...contest sponsored by Paula Swanson. Very challenging! Caryl Ramsdale
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Date: 8/19/2011 4:44:00 PM
hey Emma, crimson sea... violet sun.. psychedelic baby.... ha ha ha David
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Date: 8/19/2011 12:03:00 PM
I think yours is pretty much what the host of this contest was wanting to see,just a lot of great imagining! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/19/2011 11:08:00 AM
lovely imagery Emma in this composition for the contest luv.. good luck.. the alien sunset has my vote of approval ..
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