Alien Danger

Granger was in danger,
An alien landed in his yard,
So he slimed him with his slime-gun,
The alien running hard.

The alien jumped into his rocket ship
And pulled the portals down,
He blasted into space 
With a great big alien frown.

Granger told his parents,
They just laughed and shook their heads,
That is until they saw the scorch marks,
Just near the old chook sheds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Konos Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 6:20 AM
Until indeed! Loved it!
Williams Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 7:00 AM
Thank you Judy, so glad you enjoyed it. Kind regards from John in Australia
Allison Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 6:11 AM
ooh clever humour here John:-) do drop by I've just posted a poem lol:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
Allison Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 6:14 AM
I have tears running down my face at the title of my poem - hope it makes others smile lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Williams Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 6:14 AM
Thank you Jan, I hope the children like it. Kind regards---John
Williams Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 6:13 AM
Thank you so much Kim for your lovely comment. I hope you are well and happy. Kind regards---John
Nunez Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 6:06 AM
An entertaining story indeed. Your talent for writing for kids shines through once again, John. Very good! :)
Williams Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 6:19 AM
Kim, your reply ended up on the other side. I guess got something to do with me living in the Southern Hemisphere......hahaha....i just made myself laugh.....hope you did to.......hugs from John
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