Alice Redux

I chased you
And fell down 
the rabbit hole

Tumbling through the 
doorways of my mind 

And the deranged mess
of a love denied

(why couldn't u love me?)

the same sad refrain

I thought I could better you
It was about me shining
my divine light on you
Making u beautiful

I could have done it

But you wouldn't let me in 

Shades of a horse in armor
Casts shadows at the race
But I'm alone 
at the starting gate

It was exhilarating 
to capture your fancy

And as heart-breaking 
to loose it so quickly

And within every smirk, smile or joke
I saw hope for a different future

And so I cling to that. 

Missing you
Wishing you

Missed me.

But u won't let me in.

Who will I be at the end of this?

Out of the rabbit hole 
She comes

Perhaps madder
Sadder 
Than
Before
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 10, 2016 at 1:38 PM
awesome poem, Talena...LINDA
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July 19, 2015 at 5:07 PM
TALENA, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT
Smith Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 8:04 AM
Quite beautifully sculptured these questions of ones self and life.
Alienmermaid Avatar
March 25, 2012 at 7:50 PM
Thank you Michael.
Williams Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 2:55 AM
Talena, I really like this, but I am late for a date so gotta go, have a great weekend..David
Alienmermaid Avatar
March 25, 2012 at 7:49 PM
I love that you wrote "late for a date" - ha, ha, ha Thanks for the praise and sip some tea for me!
Brown Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 8:24 AM
I am enjoying reading up on all the poetry I can today. I am happy yours was one that I was able to read today. The weekend is here and I must also make time for my family life. I will be back on Monday as usual and I wish you a beautiful weekend filled with renewed inspiration Talena. Love, Carol
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March 25, 2012 at 7:51 PM
Thank you Carol, your warm comments are always a pleasure to read.
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