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Alga Rhythms

Juxtaposition, Of ever-changing moments: In dynamic love. · Emotions invert, Colliding interfaces: Of lost pulsing time. · Progressive attempts, Indefinable feelings: Of the human bond. · Opposed through the mess, And in the dynamic end: We mesh together.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/15/2010 5:34:00 AM
fancy, enjoyed today
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Date: 3/14/2010 10:50:00 PM
Excellent work indeed Raul..Charma
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Date: 3/14/2010 4:42:00 AM
And that is love! Beautiful words, as usual, Raul. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/13/2010 12:32:00 PM
Wow - very intense and interesting read.
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Date: 3/13/2010 6:37:00 AM
Raul, A very soulful, clever piece. Tom
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Date: 3/13/2010 6:13:00 AM
Interesting line "Opposed through the mess"...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/13/2010 5:56:00 AM
Invigorating Choka from u this morning Raul... words of contentment and passion and your introductory word.. phenomenal to grab the readers attention.. a most enjoyable read...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/13/2010 4:53:00 AM
Well thought out and flowing... loved it.
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Date: 3/13/2010 3:03:00 AM
beautiful!
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Date: 3/13/2010 3:02:00 AM
Excellent write I would say you captured the description perfectly.
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