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On a cool and cloudless Autumn eve He stepped outside of his indoor light To take a stroll, and so took his leave To feel the warmth of fire at night. The flames now gone left stars on the ground That are softly shimmering embers. Inspecting the sky he looks around To see if it lost some members. He is overwhelmed – he wouldn’t know If stars have left their cosmic stations. Taking a twig he stirs in the coals And reshapes earthly constellations.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 8/26/2012 5:16:00 PM
BRUCE, THIS IS VERY PRETTY, AND AMAZING... a deep epic mind blowing memorizing search for beauty image... love it...xox~LINDA
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