Guneet Singh Poet Rhyme

Alcohols 'N' Cigarettes

Alcohol, So fine, So smooth
So calm yet So strong
It brings people together yet is so straying
It makes you forget all pains, but brings more for life-long

Cigarette, So silent, So much it attracts
So expressive yet So devastating
It makes you relax
It makes you feel energized but weakens you in the long run

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Michael Wayne July 24, 2011 at 12:24 PM A very fine poem on the most common addictions.

Debbie Guzzi July 15, 2011 at 10:34 AM pleasure and pain forever interlinked ;) nice write! Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown July 14, 2011 at 11:10 AM Enjoying reading the very diverse poetry here today. I am happy to see you have shared a bit of your excellent writing with us today Guneet. Heres hoping you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol Guneet Singh July 14, 2011 at 10:00 PM thanks a lot carol. you always give a look to my stuff and comment... i'm obliged. thanks. have a great day.