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Alcohols 'N' Cigarettes

Alcohol, So fine, So smooth So calm yet So strong It brings people together yet is so straying It makes you forget all pains, but brings more for life-long Cigarette, So silent, So much it attracts So expressive yet So devastating It makes you relax It makes you feel energized but weakens you in the long run

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/24/2011 12:24:00 PM
A very fine poem on the most common addictions.
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Date: 7/15/2011 10:34:00 AM
pleasure and pain forever interlinked ;) nice write! Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Light & Love
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Date: 7/14/2011 11:10:00 AM
Enjoying reading the very diverse poetry here today. I am happy to see you have shared a bit of your excellent writing with us today Guneet. Heres hoping you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Guneet Singh
Date: 7/14/2011 10:00:00 PM
thanks a lot carol. you always give a look to my stuff and comment... i'm obliged. thanks. have a great day.

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