Alcoholism 2k10

A masquerader, masquerading so. As though a fellow friend, fog of pretend. Ourselves we must first apprehend so. Personal battles, freedom earthly end.

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/9/2011 5:11:00 PM

Finally found one I haven't read ans as usual, you have a lot to say in so few lines. Love the "fog of pretend" line, So true!

Red Fiery

Date: 5/1/2011 5:27:00 AM

This is something i was waiting to read for a long time...........howz everything? still not able to locate lulu friends...most of them have assembled, including myself at word pressI shall be very very very happy to see you..my friend...

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.

Date: 4/29/2011 2:04:00 PM

Thanks to all of the poets whom have taken the time to simply read, rate and review this Quatrain. A fellow poet - Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.