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Alcoholic

The demons tried to pull me by their chains But my strength is stronger and remains The silent screams The weighted down dreams There will be no more defeat These demons are going to be beat The bottle will not remain in control This is the reachable goal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 1/27/2020 4:30:00 PM
G'day Erica … addictions in any form require a lot of will power and help, but as your verse states, determination is the start of redemption - thank you Erica - Lindsay
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Erica Berg
Date: 2/16/2020 6:26:00 PM
Yes addictions in any form are so strong. Some people don't even realize that things such as working out and exercise can become an addiction
Date: 1/26/2020 4:19:00 PM
The uncontrollable controlled...Nice one
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Erica Berg
Date: 2/16/2020 6:26:00 PM
Yes!

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