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ENTERING A PUB, ORDERING A PINT. I SIT DOWN TO THINK, WHY DO I DRINK. ONE BY ONE COME UP THE THINGS, THAT CAUSES ME TO DRINK. LOSS OF LOVE, STARTED IT OFF. AND IT BECAME A HABIT, THAT HAS PUT ITS BIND UPON ME. UNTIL INTOXICATION BECAME COMPANION, IN MY TIMES OF NEED. NOW THAT I AM SOBER, I STILL THINK, WHY DO I NEED TO DRINK. I SUDDENLY REALIZE, THAT INTOXICATION WAS A SHIELD BEHIND WHICH, I HID, IN TIMES OF NEED. AS THE TRUTH SETTLES IN MY MIND, I SET DOWN THE GLASS AND LEAVE THE PUB. MAKING A VOW NOT TO HIDE BEHIND THE SHIELD OF INTOXICATION AGAIN.

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Date: 11/2/2013 9:48:00 PM
wow very strong and deep I like it you did a excellent job I can relate to that with similar habits
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 11/4/2013 12:27:00 AM
thank you rose ~V~
Date: 9/5/2013 1:09:00 PM
Not bad. Not bad at all. I like where it's been where it is and where it's going. Very strong. Nice work. :-)
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 9/6/2013 4:17:00 AM
THANX 4 D REVW ~V~
Date: 8/26/2013 11:55:00 AM
As a recovering and ever-relapsing alcoholic myself, I absolutely related to and identified with this piece. Excellent job conveying this vexing sentiment. Absolutely great piece; going into my faves :)
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 8/27/2013 11:47:00 PM
its like swamp once u step on it quite hard to come out... thnx for your review tc ~V~
Date: 8/24/2013 3:39:00 PM
Yes it is a shield...a hazy habit of grief...welcome to the soup
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 8/27/2013 11:58:00 PM
thnx Karen
Date: 8/24/2013 5:11:00 AM
- A very good poem, I also have one about this topic: "- Alcoholic - The lion roars -" Hope you will read it. - Thank you for visiting my "X" poem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 8/28/2013 12:01:00 AM
read yours pretty good too likd it vry mch ~V~
Date: 8/24/2013 5:05:00 AM
hello, Vinayak, I can't remember the time I had to drink, and drown in my sorrows. like the ending of the poem. never give up, and fill the head and heart with lies... alcohol is only a part time shield. enjoyed very much....luv...linda
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 8/27/2013 11:57:00 PM
thankfully i've moved on... thanks 4 ur revw tc ~V~
Date: 8/24/2013 5:01:00 AM
well good that you left.....nice poem.. :) A~D
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