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Alcohol

ENTERING A PUB,
ORDERING A PINT.
I SIT DOWN TO THINK,
WHY DO I DRINK.
ONE BY ONE COME UP THE THINGS,
THAT CAUSES ME TO DRINK.
LOSS OF LOVE,
STARTED IT OFF.
AND IT BECAME A HABIT,
THAT HAS PUT ITS BIND UPON ME.
UNTIL INTOXICATION BECAME COMPANION,
IN MY TIMES OF NEED.
NOW THAT I AM SOBER,
I STILL THINK,
WHY DO I NEED TO DRINK.
I SUDDENLY REALIZE,
THAT INTOXICATION WAS A SHIELD BEHIND WHICH,
I HID,
IN TIMES OF NEED.
AS THE TRUTH SETTLES IN MY MIND,
I SET DOWN THE GLASS AND LEAVE THE PUB.
MAKING A VOW NOT TO HIDE 
BEHIND THE SHIELD OF INTOXICATION AGAIN.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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La Traille Avatar
November 2, 2013 at 9:48 PM
wow very strong and deep I like it you did a excellent job I can relate to that with similar habits
Pratap Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 12:27 AM
thank you rose ~V~
Harris Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 1:09 PM
Not bad. Not bad at all. I like where it's been where it is and where it's going. Very strong. Nice work. :-)
Pratap Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 4:17 AM
THANX 4 D REVW ~V~
That Archaic Poet Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 11:55 AM
As a recovering and ever-relapsing alcoholic myself, I absolutely related to and identified with this piece. Excellent job conveying this vexing sentiment. Absolutely great piece; going into my faves :)
Pratap Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 11:47 PM
its like swamp once u step on it quite hard to come out... thnx for your review tc ~V~
Anglesey Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 3:39 PM
Yes it is a shield...a hazy habit of grief...welcome to the soup
Pratap Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 11:58 PM
thnx Karen
Andresen Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 5:11 AM
- A very good poem, I also have one about this topic: "- Alcoholic - The lion roars -" Hope you will read it. - Thank you for visiting my "X" poem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Pratap Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 12:01 AM
read yours pretty good too likd it vry mch ~V~
A   Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 5:05 AM
hello, Vinayak, I can't remember the time I had to drink, and drown in my sorrows. like the ending of the poem. never give up, and fill the head and heart with lies... alcohol is only a part time shield. enjoyed very much....luv...linda
Pratap Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 11:57 PM
thankfully i've moved on... thanks 4 ur revw tc ~V~
Danie Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 5:01 AM
well good that you left.....nice poem.. :) A~D
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