Alcohol

ALCOHOL ALCOHOL EVERY WHERE... SENIOR CITIZENS DRINKING ALCOHOL LADIES DRINKING ALCOHOL CHILDREN DRINKING ALCOHOL........... .THE WHOLE WORLD IS DRINKING ALCOHOL OH MY GOD WORLD IS GOING TO HELL WHEN IS THE DAY OF JUDGEMENT GO AWAY GO AWAY GO AWAY ALCOHOL... YOU ARE THE DEVIL... YOU ARE THE CANCEROUS.... YOU ARE THE DEATH... SAVE THE MAN .. SAVE THE WOLD... SAVE THE EARTH.... ALCOHOL DRINKING ON BIRTHDAY ........ ALCOHOL DRINKING ON MARRIAGE.. ALCOHOL DRINKING ON .....FUNERAL. ALCOHOL DRINKING ON LOST ALCOHOL DRINKING ON VICTORY.. ALCOHOL DRINKING ON SUCCESS.. STOP IT STOP IT ESCAPE FROM IT......... ..DEAR FRIENDS YOU ARE THE SOUL OF DARKNESS.. SAVE US SAVE US SAVE US ....THE WORLD

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Donna Jones

Date: 8/27/2013 7:57:00 PM

As everything else...it can be abused..nice write..:-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2013 12:09:00 AM

hello Yadhu, wow... what a tough escape. why must alcohol be the invention that comforts and destroys us.. great write. ...powerful. ..luv..linda

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 8/25/2013 2:13:00 AM

Excellent message Yadhu! Alcohol really is the cause of many evils. It is especially sad when it involves children drinking. Well written poem!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/24/2013 9:03:00 AM

Yes, and it's very hypocritical for our society to ban marijuana, something with greater value medicinally, and let people think it's better to drink!!

Yadhu Babu
Date: 8/26/2013 11:37:00 PM

THANKS FOR YOUR REVIEW ANDREA......EVEN IT IS A KIDDING POEM.......

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/24/2013 4:35:00 AM

- A very good poem, I also have one about this topic: "- Alcoholic - The lion roars -" Hope you will read it. - Thank you for visiting my "X" poem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Yadhu Babu
Date: 8/26/2013 11:28:00 PM

ANNE.., I READ YOUR POEM "Alcoholic The lion roars" NICE ONE.....

Vinayak Pratap

Date: 8/24/2013 4:14:00 AM

NICE OF YOU YADHU TO DISCOURAGE ALCOHOL USE

Allen Danie

Date: 8/24/2013 4:12:00 AM

WHAT A POEM, WHAT A POEM, WHAT POEM MAN....AWESOME !!! :)