Alchemy

Solemn blueness and the yellow of buttercups, blended in proper proportions, sifted through the geometry of the soul, acted upon by the magic mechanics of alchemy, yield the fragrance of eternity.

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Kirin Lawrence

Date: 4/28/2013 3:08:00 AM

'Alchemy' title caught my eye and thanx for this. Alchemy is an interesting idea huh? Newton certainly thought so.

Michael Ainsley

Date: 4/25/2013 7:47:00 PM

Vary nice Jack. Everything seems like magic until we understand.

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/25/2013 9:13:00 PM

Doesn't it though. For children, it's all magic, a terrible thing to lose with age... Jack

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/15/2013 2:19:00 AM

This was so intricately worded, Jack. I imagine you painting again and trying to capture the "emotions" of the scenery in all it's glory. There is magic when we poets practice alchemy with our words. Love it!

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/15/2013 8:55:00 AM

Thank you again. I appreciate e comment... Jack