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/There she stood tall, face down. Her tall frame obvious despite her bowed head. Tied and beaten like a goat being led to the abattoir. As she sobbed, I felt the strain in her voice. Her cries were not the only ones that rang through my head; but also the shrill sobs of the infant child. Naked, save for the piece of clothe that strapped him to her back. Their cries filled my heart with emotions I didn't know I possessed. Tufia! Tufiakwa! A bent little old woman with just four tobacco-stained teeth shouted. I had only arrived the previous night with barely 2 hours of sleep. I rob my sleepy eyes in confusion. “What's her crime?” I ask. “What is her crime?” I ask again, this time louder with irritation and anger over the silence that greeted my first question. She looks at me longingly with pleas in her lovely deep eyes, just as another lash hit hard across her back. A look like I should do something, say something. I look back quizzically. I need a clue, a guide, an insight into what is going on. But she only looks away in despair, as tears roll down her cheeks; She has the type of cheeks that reminded me of red succulent tomatoes. I ran forward to help. Strong and coerce hands from nowhere restrain me. The Old woman with brown teeth, points at the little creature. Then I take a good look at him. But he is just a baby, so tiny, so innocent. Tiny little fingers stretched forward, with gold-colored hair I would love to have. Cute gray eyes; so crystal-like, so clear. “How can this beauty be a "tufikawa"?” I ask no one in particular. Then it dawns on me: he isn't just a baby, he is an ALBINO. Oh! The woes of an archaic tradition, my motherland. Composed by Anita Odure Odeh Note: This poem is purely fictional, none of it ever happened./

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Date: 3/15/2016 12:59:00 PM
A wonderful first post Anita. Beautifully written poetic prose, it could easily be an excerpt from a short story or book.
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Date: 3/14/2016 1:30:00 PM
- Thank you for your first poem, Anita :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/12/2016 10:12:00 PM
Anita, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/8/2016 11:00:00 AM
Hope to see a new one from you again Anita....linda
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Date: 3/8/2016 3:53:00 AM
Thanks
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Date: 3/7/2016 11:14:00 PM
Anita,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/8/2016 4:04:00 AM
Thanks Linda, this feels like home already, I write mostly epic poems and would like 2 develop into other forms of poetry if well coach.

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