Written for Joseph May's Pleiades contest
Hadn't noticed the 6 syllable rule so not entered
A bird with a shadow as big as a bus Archaic the sailors that in him will trust Always at sea coming in from the stern Arrogant seafarers will need to learn Ancient beliefs all have basis in fact As may become clear when the odds are well stacked Adrift on a life raft?.. He’s poultry… that’s that
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