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Albatross

lost in the freedom
     ~up there in the endless sky~
              feathered giant flies

              above the oceans
   ~his large wingspan allows him
                        to dance a long time

                        on an open stage
              ~the elegance takes slowly
an albatross shape
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Alhemaidy Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 2:27 PM
Nice read! You are so right. Have a nice time with best wishes and hope. AA
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 2:39 PM
Thank you so much Abdullah. Have a nice evening
Rolland Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 4:15 PM
beautiful, you surely knows Baudelaire famous poem, l'albatros, thanks maria for sharing
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 4:30 PM
Thank you Yann. I don' t know about that, but I will find out for sure.
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