Albatross

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lost in the freedom ~up there in the endless sky~ feathered giant flies above the oceans ~his large wingspan allows him to dance a long time on an open stage ~the elegance takes slowly an albatross shape

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 9/8/2023 2:27:00 PM

Nice read! You are so right. Have a nice time with best wishes and hope. AA

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/8/2023 2:39:00 PM

Thank you so much Abdullah. Have a nice evening

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/21/2023 4:15:00 PM

beautiful, you surely knows Baudelaire famous poem, l'albatros, thanks maria for sharing

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 8/21/2023 4:30:00 PM

Thank you Yann. I don' t know about that, but I will find out for sure.

Tom Woody

Date: 8/21/2023 12:58:00 PM

Ooh I see him through your words (or is he a she?)

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 8/21/2023 1:05:00 PM

Thank you, Tom. He or she is not important. It doesn't really matters. Don't you think so? They just fly freely on the best stage to be. Have a nice time, Tomxxx