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Alaska the First

The first flickers of Alaska were lectured - a mossy ground that upon footfall created a commotion, a locomotion of mosquitos - not average but bat-like. What young person wouldn’t squirm at the frozen imagery? The missionary went on to say, Alaska is the longest bar in the world. I’d say! The coastline being about 26,000 miles long. Alaska the first, tucked away in a trove. But those who ventured out to sea, cruising the inner passage, released fresh scent of salt, waterfalls, hidden vistas. So much so, that upon booking my first Alaskan cruise, I was afraid that the bearer of such Utopian hopes might be overdoing it, such as the spoilers of a movie where you let out a sigh, disappointed by the letdown. But, Alaska is no letdown. Neither is the Yukon. Truly spirited places exist, ethereal beauty that never lets your camera rest. Your eyes pull the magic string attached to your hands, and the bulbs flash like the paparazzi on overdrive. The wilderness air with its rustic cabins and wildlife invite an out-of-body experience. You feel like your weary legs are oxygenated - you can hike the Yukon trail, mount the Denali peaks and speak to God eye-to-eye. Alaska the first, you frightened me. You still stare, but I’ve conquered your rapids, stuck out my tongue at bears and enjoyed my baked Alaska. As the terminator loudly declares, “I’ll be back” I’ll drink to that… 3/2/2019

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Date: 3/8/2019 12:43:00 PM
Wow I can see a fine poetic vivid adoration of your place, in an awesome creative way, u teased the Bears, wow they are awesome creatures lucky u see them. I grinned and admired the paparazzi line too. Kudos. Nice to read from u again, plz do comment my newest poem too.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/8/2019 6:05:00 PM
Thank you Zaynab!
Date: 3/5/2019 1:55:00 PM
- A wonderful tribute to a beautiful place on earth, Kim - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/5/2019 9:06:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 3/5/2019 4:16:00 AM
Your beautiful poem is pulling me toward Alaska. "You feel like your weary legs are oxygenated - you can hike the Yukon trail, mount the Denali peaks and speak to God eye-to-eye." Wow! Who wants to miss this? Not me!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/5/2019 5:23:00 AM
Thank you, Caren! :):)
Date: 3/2/2019 1:02:00 PM
This is great Kim. Alaska is all this and more to those of us who truly love the great outdoors. Some go for a visit and end up living there. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/2/2019 3:32:00 PM
Alaska definitely draws you in. You want to stay! God bless you too xx
Date: 3/2/2019 12:31:00 PM
What a hymn to Alaska's beauty and its mesmerizing vastness! Superbly written my friend, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/2/2019 3:31:00 PM
Thank you, my dear friend!
Date: 3/2/2019 12:16:00 PM
Lol to the ending.. great storytelling Kim..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/2/2019 3:30:00 PM
Thank you, Silent! lol

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