Alaska the First

The first flickers of Alaska were lectured -
a mossy ground that upon footfall
created a commotion,
a locomotion of mosquitos -
not average but bat-like.
What young person wouldn’t squirm
at the frozen imagery?

The missionary went on to say,
Alaska is the longest bar in the world.
I’d say! The coastline being about 26,000 miles long.

Alaska the first, tucked away in a trove.

But those who ventured out to sea,
cruising the inner passage,
released fresh scent of salt,
waterfalls, hidden vistas.

So much so, that upon booking my first Alaskan cruise,
I was afraid that the bearer of such Utopian hopes
might be overdoing it, such as  the spoilers of a movie
where you let out a sigh, disappointed by the letdown.

But, Alaska is no letdown. Neither is the Yukon.
Truly spirited places exist, ethereal beauty
that never lets your camera rest. Your eyes
pull the magic string attached to your hands,
and the bulbs flash like the paparazzi on overdrive.

The wilderness air with its rustic cabins and wildlife
invite an out-of-body experience.
You feel like your weary legs are oxygenated -
you can hike the Yukon trail, mount the Denali peaks
and speak to God eye-to-eye.

Alaska the first, you frightened me. You still stare,
but I’ve conquered your rapids,
stuck out my tongue at bears
and enjoyed my baked Alaska.

As the terminator loudly declares,
“I’ll be back”

I’ll drink to that…

3/2/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kamoonpuri Avatar
March 8, 2019 at 12:43 PM
Wow I can see a fine poetic vivid adoration of your place, in an awesome creative way, u teased the Bears, wow they are awesome creatures lucky u see them. I grinned and admired the paparazzi line too. Kudos. Nice to read from u again, plz do comment my newest poem too.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 8, 2019 at 6:05 PM
Thank you Zaynab!
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 1:55 PM
- A wonderful tribute to a beautiful place on earth, Kim - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 9:06 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 4:16 AM
Your beautiful poem is pulling me toward Alaska. "You feel like your weary legs are oxygenated - you can hike the Yukon trail, mount the Denali peaks and speak to God eye-to-eye." Wow! Who wants to miss this? Not me!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 5:23 AM
Thank you, Caren! :):)
Ball Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 1:02 PM
This is great Kim. Alaska is all this and more to those of us who truly love the great outdoors. Some go for a visit and end up living there. Great job. God Bless, JB
Rodrigues Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 3:32 PM
Alaska definitely draws you in. You want to stay! God bless you too xx
Trifiatis Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 12:31 PM
What a hymn to Alaska's beauty and its mesmerizing vastness! Superbly written my friend, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 3:31 PM
Thank you, my dear friend!
One Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 12:16 PM
Lol to the ending.. great storytelling Kim..
Rodrigues Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 3:30 PM
Thank you, Silent! lol
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