Vijay Pandit Poet Rispetto

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Alaska Glaciers

Glacial hills rise elevating fervid sights

Mesmerizing desires adorned turquoise blue

Arousing cobalt passions in sapphire heights

Floating cotton balls on melting cyan hue.

Above your scenic view gloats the sunlit sky

Lifting eager vibes upon hearing my sigh

Urging the frozen glaciers to woo romance

Embracing zealous emotions held in trance.

October 18, 2018
Rhyme: abab ccdd. Eight lines, 11 syllables each
Placed 3rd:Mid March 2019 contest by Brian Strand

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Sara Kendrick October 4, 2022 at 2:41 PM Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. I can imagine the sight of the glaciers are awesome. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Angela Crabtree December 11, 2020 at 5:45 PM Very descriptive and creative, Vijay. I enjoyed it :)

Brandy Nicole March 14, 2019 at 9:48 PM Once again, your thoughts bring both a cool touch and a steaming warmth. Wonderful feeling. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. :) Brandy

Connie Marcum Wong March 13, 2019 at 9:47 AM You enchant with your words in this gorgeous poem that you have ended spectacularly! Congratulations on your win Vijay! : ) xxoo

Susan Ashley December 23, 2018 at 8:47 PM Your breathtaking and romantic imagery flows ever so gracefully, Vijay. I especially love your last two lines; 'Urging the frozen glaciers to woo romance Embracing zealous emotions held in trance.' Pure poetry, my friend. Warmest wishes for a joyous holiday season.. ~Susan

Freddie Robinson Jr. November 21, 2018 at 11:41 AM Very creative write, VJ! To evoke such warm feeling from a frozen landscape is poetic genius. I felt the love, and it sent chills down my spine. Mighty fine ink strokes, my dear friend. Love and more love always.

Carolyn Devonshire October 29, 2018 at 5:18 PM Ah, the reawakening of the frozen heart! Just beautiful, Vijay! Hugs, Carolyn Vijay Pandit October 29, 2018 at 5:56 PM Thank you Carolyn. I'm delighted by your visit and comments.

Warren Doll October 29, 2018 at 11:18 AM Brilliant description and choice of photograph, Vijay. As I read it, I felt I was there. Wonderful! ~Warren Vijay Pandit October 29, 2018 at 3:08 PM Thank you warren..appreciate the kind remarks.

Richard Lamoureux October 28, 2018 at 10:01 AM Well expressed, one day I hope to see the glaciers in person. There is much below the surface with this metaphor for love. Vijay Pandit October 29, 2018 at 3:07 PM Thank you Richard..appreciate the kind feedback.

Kim Rodrigues October 26, 2018 at 1:27 PM So lovely the glaciers and your wonderful description, Vijay! Vijay Pandit October 29, 2018 at 3:07 PM Thank you Kim..appreciate the visit and kind remarks.

Janice Canerdy October 26, 2018 at 7:11 AM Vijay, you are a master of description. This is BEAUTIFUL! Janice Vijay Pandit October 26, 2018 at 10:01 AM Thank you Janice for your kind feedback.

Connie Marcum Wong October 25, 2018 at 12:19 PM A pristine paradise is envisioned in your romantic poem Vijay! I lived and worked there for a time. It is beautiful! Hawaii shares a kind of kinship with Alaska with not being a part of the mainland and in high cost of living. We are often excluded in being able to receive mail shipping free. : ) Vijay Pandit October 26, 2018 at 9:59 AM Yes-it is such a beautiful state..amazing landscape even beyond the glaciers. You live in a beautiful state as well. I agree..both so expensive even for visitors. Thank you Connie.

Deb Radke October 24, 2018 at 2:14 PM Very good, Vijay. I enjoyed this enormously. I lived for several years in Alaska and have incredible memories of touring Prince William Sound, at times coming quite close to some of the glaciers. You do justice to their awesome beauty. Well done. Best wishes. Deb Vijay Pandit October 26, 2018 at 10:00 AM Thank you Deb..we loved Alaska..been there twice so far. Many thanks for your kind feedback.

Gordon Mcconnell October 23, 2018 at 12:52 PM Smashing write Vijay, really brings home the reality of the glaciers, truly splendid!Blessings,Gordon Vijay Pandit October 26, 2018 at 10:02 AM Thank you Gordon..appreciate your kind feedback.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 20, 2018 at 1:10 PM - Nature's beauty both in word and image, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit October 20, 2018 at 1:25 PM Thank you Anne-Lise..appreciate your kind feedback.

M. L. Kiser October 20, 2018 at 11:21 AM My favorite color is blue; all blues. Love the photo and they do, "Urging the frozen glaciers to woo romance Embracing zealous emotions held in trance." This was a mesmerizing pen for a person who loves blue, especially; had to "Fav"; well done my friend. Vijay Pandit October 20, 2018 at 1:24 PM Your generous comments are much appreciated..many thanks, M.L.K.

Mystic Rose Rose October 20, 2018 at 9:59 AM How I wish I cloud climb those glacial peaks, place my warm hand on it and melt them to the river. lol, I love your imagery Vij, thank you for listening to me audio meditation, I really appreciate your support, hugs. Vijay Pandit October 20, 2018 at 1:24 PM Many thanks Pixie..appreciate your visit and comments.

Vladislav Raven October 20, 2018 at 7:24 AM Hi Vijay, such awesome imagery painted by your words. This piece is alive, I feel as if I can walk right into this wondrous scene. This is a joy to read this morning. This write sings for me Vijay. This is an awesome fave. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike. Vijay Pandit October 20, 2018 at 8:17 AM Thank you Mike..your generous feedback is always a pleasure to read. Appreciate your visit and comments.

Besma Riabi Dziri October 19, 2018 at 3:27 PM Beauty , warmth and the scent of love in the presence of "frozen glaciers"! Only a highly talented poet could soar high with his imagination to set his words of pearls colours and value! A jeweller masterfully picking up the rarest of his gems to adorn his fine work! A FAV. Always a great pleasure to read your beauties dear Vijay. Best regards. Blessed be always. Vijay Pandit October 19, 2018 at 3:53 PM A pleasure to read such generous comments. So much warmth and care in your words. My best regards to you as well, Besma. Appreciate your visit and comments, as always.

Winged Warrior October 18, 2018 at 7:11 PM Cool Vijay...very cool...love & light...^WW^ Vijay Pandit October 19, 2018 at 5:59 AM Thank you WW.

Andrea Dietrich October 18, 2018 at 6:05 PM Passion in the far north regions. COOL one, Vijay. Vijay Pandit October 19, 2018 at 5:59 AM Thank you Andrea.

Nette Onclaud October 18, 2018 at 5:30 PM ohh, journeying with you in this wondrous place vibrantly portrayed, vijay...beautiful pen!..huggs Vijay Pandit October 18, 2018 at 5:55 PM Appreciate the kind feedback..thank you, nette.

Heidi Sands October 18, 2018 at 4:11 PM Beautifully written Vijay. I feel I am right there, seeing it :) Vijay Pandit October 18, 2018 at 5:54 PM Thank you Heidi..appreciate your support and comments.

Charlie Smith October 18, 2018 at 11:51 AM A fitting tribute to such a glorious sight, well done my friend... Vijay Pandit October 18, 2018 at 1:10 PM Many thanks Charlie..appreciate your kind feedback.

Brandy Nicole October 18, 2018 at 10:30 AM Oh my, and you make icy mountains- those tender skies painted in blue with clouds of white, sound soooo inviting. Is it possible to be warm, while being cold all at the same time.?? Yes!! Your thoughts take me there. This is beautiful in every way. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit October 18, 2018 at 10:50 AM Thank you Brandy..you bring smiles with your comments. I appreciate the fact that you take the time to elaborate..and you are always on point.

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