Alaska Girl In Africa

Hot upon heat upon sweat--
Breezes stink like socks--
Who keeps such beauty breathing?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pettit Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 8:33 PM
Weather wise, you went from one extreme to the other. Interesting write.
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October 6, 2012 at 5:46 PM
Sounds like Florida in summer, especially at camp.
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