Alaska Girl In Africa

Hot upon heat upon sweat--
Breezes stink like socks--
Who keeps such beauty breathing?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/6/2012 8:33:00 PM
Weather wise, you went from one extreme to the other. Interesting write.
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Date: 10/6/2012 5:46:00 PM
Sounds like Florida in summer, especially at camp.
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