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Poetic Form: Monoku
Inspired: 2024 August 27
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alas parting

bestilled heart's voice of the veil ~ wept instill a heart's voice of solemn grave
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Allison Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 3:47 PM
so few words say so much, such a sad poem Hilo poet hugs jan xx
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 30, 2024 at 2:26 AM
Mahalo Jan. I thought to expound on Shakespeare's words, methinks I fair well in quiet honor. Aloha William
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 2:07 PM
Hello soltto, A very sad poem. Aloha! Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 10:34 AM
Hello William, Aloha! You are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 3:16 PM
Mahalo, Darlene, for your presence and share. Aloha, William
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