alas parting

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Poetic Form: Monoku
Inspired: 2024 August 27
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bestilled heart's voice of the veil ~ wept instill a heart's voice of solemn grave

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/27/2024 3:47:00 PM

so few words say so much, such a sad poem Hilo poet hugs jan xx

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/30/2024 2:26:00 AM

Mahalo Jan. I thought to expound on Shakespeare's words, methinks I fair well in quiet honor. Aloha William

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/27/2024 2:07:00 PM

Hello soltto, A very sad poem. Aloha! Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/28/2024 10:34:00 AM

Hello William, Aloha! You are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/27/2024 3:16:00 PM

Mahalo, Darlene, for your presence and share. Aloha, William