Alas, If Only I Can

You are the sweetest woman
You are the most handsome man
I would give you the warmest embrace
Alas, if only I can
I would add you to my coffee
Or even take you by the hand
I would dance with you all night
Alas, if only I can 
I would introduce you to all my friends
Or even invite you out with the clan
I would share my ice cream cone with you
Alas, if only I can
I would take you to the mosque
Whenever we hear the azan
I would watch Forrest Gump with you
Alas, if only I can
I would jot you down on paper
Observing all the emotions you fan
Then turn you into a lyric poem
Now that my friend I can

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/28/2010 4:00:00 PM
this is sweet. forest gump? one of my favorites also. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 6/26/2010 10:27:00 PM
Cool poem!!
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Date: 6/7/2010 4:05:00 PM
Witty! Executed with excellent rhythm, loved it =)
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Date: 6/7/2010 7:10:00 AM
This is excellent. It flows very well. I like the consistency of the theme and the conclusion. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/6/2010 8:34:00 AM
Farah, yes, my dear, you can. BTW I love Forrest Gump! So wonderful to hear from you, YF4L, God Bless, mj
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Date: 6/6/2010 4:49:00 AM
nice ending, with the thought, you can not stop my desires. The strong feelings of emotion alert you to do and think in the most positive ways. Enjoyed,..Sidney LeeAnn
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Date: 5/24/2010 9:26:00 PM
beautiful poem! thanks for sharing luv edward
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Date: 5/18/2010 9:52:00 AM
I sense a hint of sadness maybe? Alas = regretfully, indeed you may turn this into a lyric poem, yet can you turn your heart into what you only want? never doubted the beauty you had. Love, Sami.
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Date: 5/2/2010 2:28:00 PM
Very clever writing here, farah. Hope you are enjoying beautiful spring days !!
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Date: 4/24/2010 1:18:00 PM
goodness, what a delightful ending! Farah! well done!!!just enjoyed a cone last nite, in fact, from a neighborhood shoppe that closes for the winter! ok..ok..I had chocolate ice-cream w/peanut butter swirl!!! love, jimbo
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Date: 4/23/2010 4:24:00 PM
Intresting enjoyed the motion of the want, well expressed what you can,,Irma
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