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Alas, Gehenna

First descent had every bone crushed, as a true descent must do. Second descent was of a toxin placed neither by devil nor god. Third descent, fourth, and beyond, were of increasingly greater craft and increasingly greater uncertainty. I lay in the soil, assimilated into the common grave of mankind. I vanished into the worms, the stench ought to have killed me, yet abjectly I survived. And thereafter I saw the hereafter, and I would not withstand the finality of Gehenna's flames. In a deathly moment of failure, I returned from the grave, for I hadn't the might to remain. 6th September 2018

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Date: 10/1/2018 8:23:00 AM
Potent. Spectacular piece of writing my friend. xomo
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 10/1/2018 11:32:00 AM
Thanks, Maureen, too kind.
Date: 9/17/2018 12:47:00 AM
Interesting choices of words. Especially the last stanza. Their are those who believe that to be the case, however the joy of their loved ones abounds.
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Date: 9/17/2018 9:32:00 AM
True that, Richard. Dark needs light.
Date: 9/13/2018 5:30:00 AM
Deep , dark and profound my friend. Where true death lives is an eternal state. On earth man is cast into the ground to decay back into, THAT FROM WHICH HE CAME. Yet again superb poetry my good friend... A fav.. a dark gem
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 9/14/2018 10:59:00 AM
Thanks Robert, if a dark poet of your caliber enjoys a piece, I take that as very high praise, and thank you no end for fav'ing.
Date: 9/8/2018 3:04:00 PM
Interesting write my friend... a pleasure to read...love & hereafter...^WW^
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 9/9/2018 1:02:00 PM
Thanks W's, glad you enjoyed.
Date: 9/7/2018 4:30:00 PM
Clever words..And thereafter I saw the hereafter...and ..In a deathly moment of failure..Intriguing poem Lawrence..made me pause and think.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 9/8/2018 11:32:00 AM
Thanks Vijay, appreciated.

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