Alas

Alas! Mankind 
Is preoccupied
With living
Not loving. 
Alas!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Sietesantos Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 8:09 AM
Alas! It's all too true that we get too caught up with material things and not with the things that should really matter in life! Thanks for sharing this poetic gem! Pandiya
Kithinji Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 11:43 AM
Thanx Pa!
Tsiluma Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 3:58 AM
This one hit hard Gerald! It is unfortunate that circumstances force some to just survive by the basic needs without thinking too much about their emotions but it is more unfortunate for those who have a lot and yet they fall short when it comes to love. Excellently penned!
Stella Avatar
December 22, 2013 at 8:34 PM
so true with closed eyes great imagery too but sad thanks for comment to my work happy holidays
Dunn Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 12:16 PM
Alas to live, to love, to experience that which lies beyond. thank you for your comments on my writes. cheri
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 7:37 PM
Grook!!! Still talking about names (^_^) this is a funny one for such a deep and interesting philosophical thought. I love short poems...perhaps because of my long name!? Btw, it is a poem in itself, ypu know: the whole means "This- seed'- that- has- been- blessed- with-the-power-of-LIFE/ is The -Princess-To-Rule-Qver-You/ And-now-she-is-married-to-my-son-the-one-blessed-by-BEAUTY"...Blessings to you too, dear poet friend , Hanitra
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 3:10 PM
Quite a big challenge but I'll try and if I get exhausted, it will be your fault!...
Kithinji Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 1:38 AM
Do that 'short' name in shape; I'm sure to love it. Thank you, VRA.
Deschler Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 5:52 PM
So true! We are all so concerned with money and the "finer things" in life. Yet, all we really need is love! A great message in this poem! Great work, Gerald!...Thank you for the nice comments. I really appreciate it!
Kithinji Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 2:08 AM
Thank you too Kelly for visiting so often.
Kearley Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 11:23 AM
So this is a Grook? I will have to look into this form once... Thank you for pointing out my slip up in that last poem. Greatly appreciated always. Write on! my friend...
Kithinji Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 2:09 AM
Dan, I'm not even sure; it's my first day out on a voyage of discovery! Let me know if it fits.
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