Airhead Dreamer

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CRAZY total NUTCASE what were you THINKING do you THINK at ALL? airhead DREAMER GET YOUR ACT together, tell me are you effing under the WEATHER? retard! ||| | | Words hurt They do If I am nice Will you be too? Words kill They do If i am gentle Can you please be too? *** February 12, 2017 Poem by Darren White

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 10/26/2017 11:54:00 PM

Kaboom. Explosive, then selttling as dust does, tenderly. Awesome piece love xomo!

Roy Pett

Date: 2/14/2017 6:57:00 AM

Very clever piece Darren, and well thought out enjoyed very much, Roy.

Darren White
Date: 2/14/2017 7:21:00 AM

Thank you Roy, it was quite a puzzle to get all the words in the right place :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/13/2017 10:30:00 PM

Is this piece in the shape of a martini glass? If so, it makes perfect sense...

Darren White
Date: 2/13/2017 11:01:00 PM

hahaha, it is, isn't it? :)

Sara Ella

Date: 2/13/2017 8:44:00 PM

Hurtful words happen all the time whether someone says them on purpose or they are in my head. You are right! Your reminder to be gentle is so well said <3 <3 <3

Darren White
Date: 2/13/2017 11:00:00 PM

They do, yeah... Be more considerate around each other <3

Chris Green

Date: 2/13/2017 6:41:00 AM

Great message Darren, it is so easy to just be nice.

Darren White
Date: 2/13/2017 6:44:00 AM

Yeah, but it just doesn't happen, you should hear the crap I get to hear daily. Good I have thick skin ;)

Tim Smith

Date: 2/13/2017 6:16:00 AM

Unfortunately not everyone will be nice back. ..But I will

Darren White
Date: 2/13/2017 6:36:00 AM

Thank Tim! On my blog I can put the picture where it belongs: between the last | and the sentence "words hurt"...