Darren White Poet Free verse

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Airhead Dreamer

CRAZY                                                                                                                      total
NUTCASE                      what
were                                                                                      you         THINKING
do                   you
THINK                                                at                            ALL?
airhead                                              DREAMER
GET                 YOUR                ACT
together, tell me are you
effing under the
WEATHER?
retard!
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Words hurt
They do
If I am nice
Will you be too?
Words kill
They do
If i am gentle
Can you please be too?

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February 12, 2017
Poem by Darren White

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 26, 2017 at 11:54 PM Kaboom. Explosive, then selttling as dust does, tenderly. Awesome piece love xomo!

Roy Pett February 14, 2017 at 6:57 AM Very clever piece Darren, and well thought out enjoyed very much, Roy. Darren White February 14, 2017 at 7:21 AM Thank you Roy, it was quite a puzzle to get all the words in the right place :)

Charlie Smith February 13, 2017 at 10:30 PM Is this piece in the shape of a martini glass? If so, it makes perfect sense... Darren White February 13, 2017 at 11:01 PM hahaha, it is, isn't it? :)

Sara Ella February 13, 2017 at 8:44 PM Hurtful words happen all the time whether someone says them on purpose or they are in my head. You are right! Your reminder to be gentle is so well said <3 <3 <3 Darren White February 13, 2017 at 11:00 PM They do, yeah... Be more considerate around each other <3

Chris Green February 13, 2017 at 6:41 AM Great message Darren, it is so easy to just be nice. Darren White February 13, 2017 at 6:44 AM Yeah, but it just doesn't happen, you should hear the crap I get to hear daily. Good I have thick skin ;)

Tim Smith February 13, 2017 at 6:16 AM Unfortunately not everyone will be nice back. ..But I will Darren White February 13, 2017 at 6:36 AM Thank Tim! On my blog I can put the picture where it belongs: between the last | and the sentence "words hurt"...