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Look! An airborne leaf
    Twirling about in the wind
    Not knowing if it's coming

         Or going. Floating
 Like hope in a passing breeze
    I wish I were as carefree


Date written and posted: 08/01/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/1/2018 9:37:00 PM
Oh just lovely, Edward. Easy, breezy and beautiful. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/1/2018 10:53:00 PM
Thank you very much, Susan!
Date: 8/1/2018 7:57:00 AM
Lovely, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/1/2018 2:01:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 8/1/2018 7:36:00 AM
Oh to be so carefree Edward, but of course it is coming down to earth to die:-( Hugs Jan xx
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/1/2018 1:59:00 PM
So true:-( Thanks for the comments and visit, Jan!
Date: 8/1/2018 6:24:00 AM
Don't we all, Edward....very nicely written, easy and smooth .... like a floating leaf....
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/1/2018 2:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, John!

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