Edward Ibeh Poet Choka

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Airborne Leaf

Look! An airborne leaf
    Twirling about in the wind
    Not knowing if it's coming

         Or going. Floating
 Like hope in a passing breeze
    I wish I were as carefree


Date written and posted: 08/01/2018

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Susan Ashley August 1, 2018 at 9:37 PM Oh just lovely, Edward. Easy, breezy and beautiful. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Edward Ibeh August 1, 2018 at 10:53 PM Thank you very much, Susan!

Line Gauthier August 1, 2018 at 7:57 AM Lovely, Edward. Edward Ibeh August 1, 2018 at 2:01 PM Thank you, Line!

Jan Allison August 1, 2018 at 7:36 AM Oh to be so carefree Edward, but of course it is coming down to earth to die:-( Hugs Jan xx Edward Ibeh August 1, 2018 at 1:59 PM So true:-( Thanks for the comments and visit, Jan!

John Lawless August 1, 2018 at 6:24 AM Don't we all, Edward....very nicely written, easy and smooth .... like a floating leaf.... Edward Ibeh August 1, 2018 at 2:00 PM Thank you very much, John!