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Today, our sun shone neath a haze that blocked its rays. Views disappeared; the air looked weird. The weather forecast sounded great; blue skies, clear fate. Stead, we were shroud inside a cloud! But, then I heard, as the news broke, wildfires spread smoke from West to East- an airborne beast! July 21, 2021 Contest: 12 Lines In Rhyme Sponsor: Joseph May Rhyme Scheme: aabb, ccdd, eeff Syllable Count: 8,4,4,4, 8,4,4,4 8,4,4,4

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Date: 7/28/2021 5:22:00 AM
A poignant write, Sandra! Well done! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/26/2021 10:04:00 AM
Beautiful depiction of the ecological outrage. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/26/2021 10:03:00 AM
Hi Sandra, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/26/2021 9:40:00 AM
A big CONGRATS on your win with this timely piece, Sandra. Janice
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Date: 7/26/2021 6:06:00 AM
Wildfires are so devastating, Very nicely penned Sandra, Congrats on your win
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