Airborne

aquire spitfire retire expire To soar on wings aquire spitfire fly, last flight alights retire expire sigh. 1/ 21/ 2018.

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Arturo Michael

Date: 1/27/2018 6:18:00 PM

I hope I don't expire...Lots of rhythm and flow...All the best George

George Seal
Date: 1/28/2018 3:58:00 AM

Hi Arturo, it's expire in the sense of breathe out, hence to sigh. You knew that already, just pulling my leg i suppose. So kind of you to comment. My kindest regards. George.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/21/2018 3:53:00 PM

We have a friend who is spitfire mad - he would love your poem George! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

George Seal
Date: 1/28/2018 4:05:00 AM

Hi Jan, thanks for your best wishes, i bet it would be a good feeling to fly in one. I mean in peacetime of course. My most kindest regards to you. George.