Air, Fire, Water - Personification of the Elements Poetry Contest
Air whispered wish with its all might
to rouse fire to groom so bright;
Fire has all the heat to give,
but, without air, fire can't live.
The fuel comes like unfolded maze,
like love comes from unforeseen place;
Heat, fuel, air make fire to glow
to warm the hearts as cold as snow.
With the spark of its sweet ember-
precious moments to remember,
the nights when lovers make their pray
to love forever, come to stay.
When heat of fire comes full rage,
the water rips its thorny cage;
Fire kneels in full submission,
water tames its wild volition.
1st place
Judged: September 24, 2023
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