Andrew Fairchild Poet Sapphic stanza

Air - Anxiety - Sapphic Stanza

Parachuting has its advantage – Freefall!
Flying, screaming, scareder than ever prior
Chute won’t open!  Now I am coming, gliding
Hope MY chute opens!

(fiction)

2/28/2019

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Andrea Dietrich March 1, 2019 at 9:07 PM haha, funny one . I like this even better. Andrew Fairchild March 2, 2019 at 11:11 PM Onlyl funny, if it's not YOUR parachute that doesn't open! But thanks! I am glad you like it! Note: NEVER PACK YOUR OWN PARACHUTE, I have heard, HAVE AN EXPERT DO IT!

P.S. Awtry February 28, 2019 at 3:49 PM "scareder than ever prior" made me laugh which is awful cause someone is in trouble! Andrew Fairchild February 28, 2019 at 3:53 PM That's all right! There is no such word as 'scareder', it's 'more scared', so maybe my neologism made you laugh. I always appreciate laughter! ;D