Air

Floating in an unknown speed, emotions feel fact while diluted logistics calculate fiction. -8/20/16

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/23/2016 6:17:00 PM

lovely one liner congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 8/23/2016 4:17:00 PM

Love this one! So creative and you carried a great flow...congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Eve Roper

Date: 8/21/2016 9:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, IrOnic. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2016 8:25:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Ironic.

Ironic Zink
Date: 8/21/2016 9:01:00 PM

My daughter is finally crawling right now for the first time... she's a princess. ~had to exclaim

Ironic Zink
Date: 8/21/2016 8:59:00 PM

Thank you Andrea! I needed a win!

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/21/2016 5:41:00 PM

Hi Ironik, Congratulations on your winning write: ')Alexis

Ironic Zink
Date: 8/21/2016 8:59:00 PM

Thank you Alexis. You are so sweet.