Air

Floating in an unknown speed, emotions feel fact while diluted logistics calculate fiction.
-8/20/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 6:17 PM
lovely one liner congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 4:17 PM
Love this one! So creative and you carried a great flow...congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
Roper Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 9:13 PM
Congratulations on your win, IrOnic. Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 8:25 PM
Congrats on your win, Ironic.
Zink Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 9:01 PM
My daughter is finally crawling right now for the first time... she's a princess. ~had to exclaim
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August 21, 2016 at 8:59 PM
Thank you Andrea! I needed a win!
Y. Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 5:41 PM
Hi Ironik, Congratulations on your winning write: ')Alexis
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August 21, 2016 at 8:59 PM
Thank you Alexis. You are so sweet.
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