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March 17, 2024
Placed 1st: Appreciation, Anger, Air, Angelic Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Soto Poet


 

Air

Live in the sunshine, swim the sea, drink the wild air
(Ralph Waldo Emerson)
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Cherish the moments, rising on fabric of fuchsia skies,
Painting motifs of amber dawn, dipped in golden sunrise,
In brushstrokes mauve, tinted pink, on opaline skyline;
Where themes heavenly with dreams of morn entwine.

Ride path of sun’s trajectory, soak-in aureate sunshine,
Be amid nature’s mystery, sky-scapes of mystical design;
Rejoice the day, in its prime, revel life’s moments sublime,
Before they wither away, falling prey to reign of time.

Sail the blue waves, synchronize with rhythms of sea,
Undulating with inspiration of tides, vying shores of glee,
Ruminating of paradise, afloat on resplendence, carefree;
Blissful, hearing robins sing, watching butterflies spree.

Be hypnotized, on cusp of twilight, inhale the wild air,
Pulsating from hearts of trees as winds westerly blare;
Be the moment chiming, strumming tenor of breeze, 
Snuggling rosy delight, caressing eve’s blush of tease.

Extolling arc of crimson horizon, lost in sun’s goodbye,
As day-decaying beautifies aura, in shades of magenta dye,
Capture the moments blazing fire, ceding to moonlight,
Dipping in the ocean, dispersing glimmer of ruby delight.
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Goldsmith Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 9:02 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your magical  "Air" write again. Have a blessed day.............
Rodrigues Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 9:17 PM
I’m a sucker for the sea: Sail the blue waves, synchronize with rhythms of sea, Undulating with inspiration of tides, vying shores of glee. Such a lovely write, Vijay!
Situation Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 6:00 PM
When ever I see your name I know to look. Because of the rhymes and the art as it is meant to be and this piece is what I expect of you. Because you are capable and you don't waste our time. TS
Baker Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 6:40 AM
Your imagery is so delightful, Vijay. The words just flow smoothly as I read. You are a master wordsmith, my friend. You weave the colors and emotions so freely. A FAV for my list! Good luck in the contest! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Nicole Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 10:02 AM
' Live in the sunshine, swim the sea, drink the wild air. ' I can see myself in this quote. :) Beyond ' sky-scapes of mystical design, ' and ' brushstrokes of pink; moments sublime. ' Your thoughts are beautiful in every way, Vijay. I feel as though I'm floating on clouds on cotton. My heart is smiling. :) Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Buehler Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 7:31 PM
In a poem of such loveliness, it's hard to pick favorite lines. But, I will say that the third and final verses are my favorites, Vijay. Great work!
Kendrick Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 7:38 AM
Very colorful and expressive lines you have penned. Your talent is amazing. Sara K
Beaufort Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 7:55 AM
Vijay, you observe and describe the world as beautiful. In fact, your poem may be better than the real thing! It's pleasant to take it all in as it occurs, and as long as we take part without damaging it for the next person, it's a great thing for us all.
Daniel Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 5:40 AM
Oh! This is incredible, Vijay:)
May Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 5:18 PM
"Painting motifs of amber dawn, dipped in golden sunrise, extolling arc of crimson horizon, lost in sun's goodbye", You weave your words beautifully Vijay
Bowring Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:33 AM
Dear Vijay this is so splendid, so beautiful, so exquisite - I could go on and on praising this wonderful, delightful poem. There is so much to admire here - so much to immerse yourself in. Absolutely gorgeous imagery with such creative use of colour from your vivid palette of poetic colours. It is such a blissful, calming read where you transport the reader and invite them to marvel at all the beauty. This is such a gorgeous read full of imagery. Loved it. Good luck in the contest.
Pandit Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 12:30 PM
I am honored by your generous remarks, Christina. Your visits are always graceful and rewarding. Much appreciate you stopping by. Many thanks. Hugs to you as well.
Bowring Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:34 AM
A winner to me. Hugs and blessings xx
Rose  Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 3:34 AM
"Ceding to moonlight," I cede to your poetry, for you are a comet poet and I cherish your poem.
Pandit Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 12:29 PM
So very kind of you my friend. Much appreciate, Vienna. Many thanks.
There Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 10:54 PM
What a joyous poem, Vijay! And a wonderful reminder of such beautiful gifts this life offers, if we will receive them. I am reminded by your words to strive to enjoy such pleasures, and if I am not easily able to, I can reach for them in my dreams!! Thank you for this ~ another favorite from you!
Pandit Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 12:28 PM
Glad to see you my friend. Always a delight when you visit. Much appreciate your kind remarks and your FAVE, Jodie. Many thanks. Wishing you the best.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 6:23 AM
Brilliant choice of colour to enhance this lovely poem. You produce imagery one after the other perfectly.
Pandit Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 12:26 PM
Thank you Victor--much appreciate you being there.
Cunningham Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 3:52 AM
Stunning imagery and vocabulary that is your trademark Vijay, a well composed verse. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
Pandit Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 6:19 AM
You are so very kind to say so, Tom. Thank you for being there. Much appreciate you visiting and commenting.
Andresen Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 11:47 AM
- A wonderful air to breathe in, Vijay :) - A beautiful poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 6:17 AM
Glad you thought so, Anne-Lise. Much appreciate you visiting and commenting.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 11:27 AM
Your "Air" is a magical write. A great ending. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away..................
Pandit Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 6:16 AM
Glad to hear that from you Paula. Much appreciate your visit and insights. Many thanks.
Narain Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 10:26 AM
A GOOD DEAL OF METAPHORS AND IMAGERY, VIJAY. iT IS BEYOND ME. SURE WINNER.
Pandit Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 6:15 AM
Thanks for your vote of confidence, Jay. Much appreciate you visiting and commenting.
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 8:49 AM
You used fantastic imagery like the sponsor asked for. A sure win, sweetie
Pandit Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 6:14 AM
You are so very kind, Andrea. Glad to hear that from you. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Empress Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 8:12 AM
Dear Vijay, what an artistically delightful write this is. Your poem so eloquently fits the theme of the quote too and flows seamlessly, i love your use of colors to enhance the beauty of nature and time and how Youv expressed throughout the need to seize the moment and live in the moment, appreciating all that which is around, so many lines stood out for me but i love “ Be hypnotized, on cusp of twilight, inhale the wild air,“ soul warming! This is so captivating and gorgeous! Powerful! Fave
Pandit Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 6:13 AM
Much appreciate your presence, my friend--your kind and encouraging thoughts are always valued--and so is your FAVE. Many thanks for spending the time to write detailed insights, Ink.
One Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 6:18 AM
Your poem beautifully captures the fleeting yet precious moments of life, painting vivid scenes of nature's wonders and inviting readers to immerse themselves in the beauty of each passing moment. The imagery of "fabric of fuchsia skies" and "amber dawn dipped in golden sunrise" sets a captivating tone, evoking a sense of awe and wonder. The use of vibrant colours and poetic language creates a mesmerising atmosphere that transports the reader to a realm where time seems to stand still.
Pandit Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 6:10 AM
So glad to hear that--especially from you, my friend. Always a joy to read your thoughtful remarks. Many thanks, SO.
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