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Air

Live in the sunshine, swim the sea, drink the wild air.
(Ralph Waldo Emerson)

Untamed as a hew in mid air is the heart,
so spontaneous ! 
  
Allow the golden coin of heaven 
to beam down at you 
its a living sun
and it lives above the sea 
Drink the wild air of life,
and be its poetry; 

Unnamed is the ocean wild and carefree  
it belongs to you but it also belongs to me 
This is not a Baptism    
slice into it with unbarred laughter 

Don't live in the shallow 
nor sit like a clam 
Swim like the otter 
drink its wild forces
 
You can't tame the wind, 
but you can claim the air.  

Copyright © Mystic Rose Rose | Year Posted 2024

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Jay Narain Date: 3/28/2024 9:55:00 AM Nice poem on the theme of Air. Congrats on win. Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/28/2024 9:49:00 AM Congratulations on your win. Your "Air" is a powerful/wonderful write. Great Ending... I love this one. FAV for me... Have a blessed day............. Login to Reply

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 3/16/2024 6:40:00 PM Dear Rose, What a breathtaking ode to the untamed spirit and boundless beauty of life. Your words soar with spontaneity and freedom, urging us to embrace the wildness within and drink deeply from the wellspring of existence. Through your poetry, you invite us to dive into life with unbarred laughter and unbridled joy. Thank you for inspiring us to claim the air and be its poetry. - Blessings, Daniel Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/17/2024 3:50:00 AM I so appreciate your visits Daniel, maybe one day you'll grace us with your presence on Cafe night,

Yann Rolland Date: 3/16/2024 4:19:00 PM uplifting poem, you have a talent and secret for that, always i enjoy reading your deep poetry have a sweet sunday poet Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/17/2024 3:49:00 AM Your always so kind with your comments and presence here Yann, thank you so much !

Jan Allison Date: 3/16/2024 2:50:00 PM beautiful and uplifting Vienna i especially love 'Allow the golden coin of heaven to beam down at you ' makes me think of a photo i took with a beam of sun shining down on the hillside. i must try and use it in a poem one day:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/16/2024 3:28:00 PM so good to hear from you Jan, hope your keeping well, dear friend, its been a while, days months slipping so fast, hard to catch up at times, have a great day :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/16/2024 12:43:00 PM Joyful verse, my friend--reveling in gift of nature. Splendid write, Vienna. Awesome ending lines. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/16/2024 3:28:00 PM Happy that you like it Vijay, I hope your keeping well, and that poetry is alive in you, as always :)

Ink Empress Date: 3/16/2024 11:09:00 AM What a powerful write, so much depth in your soft and seamless words woven in such poetic elegance. I especially love “ You can't tame the wind, but you can claim the air” one of those lines that should be framed and hung to remind ourselves everyday. Impeccable! Pleasure reading this fragrant rose. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/16/2024 3:27:00 PM Glad you enjoyed it Ink, struggling lately with my thoughts and pen, lol, so this one surprised me , have a great day dear heart