Aimlessly

whispered 
on the threads
of darkness
my secrets
drift aimlessly
in this wind
in hopes
they reach you
before morning
arises again



(just a scribble)
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Kiser Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 6:07 PM
"Whispered on the threads of darkness", wonderful.
Adams Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 8:08 PM
Thank you ML :) hugs
Krutsinger Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 5:09 AM
Such a delicate mysticalness about this one!
Adams Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 10:34 AM
Thank you... sometimes these scribbles make more impact than a bigger poem... hugs
Wolves Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 8:45 AM
wonderful
Adams Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 10:04 AM
Thank you :) hugs
Green Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 7:03 AM
Beautifully sent thoughts Sandy on an enchanting poetic wind. I am sure this poem would brighten anyone's morning while awaiting the sunrise...it did mine.
Adams Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 10:04 AM
Thank you Chris... glad my words could help brighten your morning :) hugs
Wolf Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 9:07 PM
Keep scribbling. Very sweet and enjoyable. You so well 'on the go!' Cheers, Gershon
Adams Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 10:04 AM
Thank you so much Gershon... nature inspires me more than anything i do believe :) hugs
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