aimless violence

once this vacuous void
stood aimless and wild –
	now mindless and violent
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Maverick Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 3:47 PM
This shouts out..Room for improvement.' Yet only a few are Listening.' And fewer will act.. Sad fact.' Well done Linda-Alice.)..Ps I do hope will get aware though.)
Fowler Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 6:55 PM
Hi Joe. You are so correct...being aware is the first step, let's hope it leads to listening and acting. Thanks for the visit. Always a plea Joe. :)
Crandall Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 8:32 AM
Interesting way of putting it, elle, aimless and wild sounds better
Fowler Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 8:38 AM
I agree. Many thanks my friend. elle :)
Hind Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 10:00 PM
That kind must be the worst. Love to your soul,
Fowler Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 8:42 AM
Similar to civilization, n’est-ce pas Paige?
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 5:54 PM
wow, powerful Haiku!
Fowler Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 6:01 PM
Hi dear Sara. Ohmy, thank you! hugs :)
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