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Aim High -The Pantoum Style

~Aim High~
(Pantoum)


Check the sky aim high and then just fly 
There's so much you can do, achieve  
Just set mind and focus today don't be shy 
God has great plans for all your life, just believe  

There's so much you can do, achieve
Don't let bad things get in your way   
God has great plans for all your life, just believe 
Sky's the limit don't ever quit, to God just pray  

Don't let bad things  get in your way 
Just set mind and focus today don't be shy   
Sky's the limit don't ever quit, to God just pray  
Check the sky aim high and then just fly!  


Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2014



May.06.2016




~Author's Notes:

"The Pantoum" is a Malaysian verse form adapted by French poets and very occasionally imitated in English.The pantoum is a poetic form derived from the pantun, a Malay verse form: specifically from the pantun berkait, a series of interwoven quatrains. The pantoum is a form of poetry similar to a villanelle in that there are repeating lines throughout the poem.
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