Aharmatia

If the dark angel rings your bell, oftimes a simple muse will become our hell- If on enticement's path the furies we chance pur inspiration is led a merry dance- If time lies idle upon our hands and to soft whispers,we hark, our endeavours miss the mark Listen close,which twin to choose Enticement's fury or inspiration's muse

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David Smalling

Date: 11/18/2010 8:47:00 AM

If I were your biographer, just by writing about your poetry I would be famous ... no convention holds you, except your own.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/12/2010 7:12:00 PM

Words of great wisdom Brian and a grandly penned piece with a poignant message to the reader.. full of great advice ... thankxxx for sharing this wonderful Sonnet .. happy weekend my friend..with luv..

Hathor Ammutlinra

Date: 11/12/2010 11:04:00 AM

Hamartia an interesting concept with the slight way you describe a simple excess with a mistake and wait on a tragedy soon to be. Listening is the right choice, one should not be willful on violating the gods' and their laws. Love the action and inspiration here. Adding this poem to my favorites (LIN~RA)