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Aha Liberty

Gloom and depression,
Belong you must to betray,
Aha ! Liberty !



Written on 1/8/14
Contest - Aha haiku
Sponsor- Regina Riddle


5th place win

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Pandita Sietesantos

August 9, 2014 at 9:58 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win, Dr. Upma. I enjoyed reading this beautiful haiku. Excellent write with clever "AHA"! Pandita

Sam Raj

August 9, 2014 at 4:47 AM

Congrats Dr.Upma, Nice write. Thanks for sharing

Carolyn Devonshire

August 8, 2014 at 10:17 PM

Indeed, we have to be considered trustworthy (belonging) before we can betray. Truly an "AHA" moment, sweet friend. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

August 8, 2014 at 2:31 PM

glory be, dr upma.. huge congrats!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 8, 2014 at 11:47 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 8, 2014 at 1:21 AM

Thought provoking expression, Dr. Upma. congrats

Paul Callus

August 4, 2014 at 4:51 PM

Well reasoned, Upma! Why get stressed and depressed when with afterthought you realize that you're better off that way!! Liberate you heart and move on!:) // paul

Paul Callus

August 8, 2014 at 2:52 PM

Congratulations, Upma....Liberty has provided you with a merited win! // paul