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Aha liberty


Gloom and depression,
Belong you must to betray,
Aha ! Liberty !



Written on 1/8/14
Contest - Aha haiku
Sponsor- Regina Riddle


5th place win

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/9/2014 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Dr. Upma. I enjoyed reading this beautiful haiku. Excellent write with clever "AHA"! Pandita
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Date: 8/9/2014 4:47:00 AM
Congrats Dr.Upma, Nice write. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 8/8/2014 10:17:00 PM
Indeed, we have to be considered trustworthy (belonging) before we can betray. Truly an "AHA" moment, sweet friend. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/8/2014 2:31:00 PM
glory be, dr upma.. huge congrats!.. huggs
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Date: 8/8/2014 11:47:00 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/8/2014 1:21:00 AM
Thought provoking expression, Dr. Upma. congrats
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Date: 8/4/2014 4:51:00 PM
Well reasoned, Upma! Why get stressed and depressed when with afterthought you realize that you're better off that way!! Liberate you heart and move on!:) // paul
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Date: 8/8/2014 2:52:00 PM
Congratulations, Upma....Liberty has provided you with a merited win! // paul
Date: 8/2/2014 12:19:00 PM
One to ponder on reading this fine Haiku, Upma. Good luck in the contest, James :)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2014 11:36:00 AM
Thnx James !
Date: 8/2/2014 12:51:00 AM
good luck in the contest! I spent over and hour just thinking. Then I saw a movie today and AHA, I got my idea!!!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2014 11:36:00 AM
Thnx Andrea! Glad u had an idea,, I m ready to be amazed !
Date: 8/1/2014 9:25:00 PM
Interesting thoughts Dr. Upma
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2014 11:35:00 AM
Yes Dave gloom n depression r state of mind , coming out of betrayal. But once u realise that betrayal can only be if u ever belonged ,, suddenly relaxes mind n aha a feeling of freedom! Thnx for ur visit Dave !
Date: 8/1/2014 8:47:00 AM
Interesting thoughts penned..Good to get release from gloom and depression..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/1/2014 12:27:00 PM
Thnx for ur kind visit n words Sara !
Date: 8/1/2014 7:38:00 AM
well written Haiku. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xxx
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/1/2014 12:27:00 PM
Thnx Jan!