Aha

candy and flowers guilty look on Hubby's face new boat in driveway! Contest: Haiku "aha" Moment Sponsor: Regina Riddle

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Skat A

Date: 5/26/2015 5:01:00 PM

lol, I bet you two will enjoy the fun afterwards. SK

Jack Clark

Date: 10/21/2014 8:22:00 PM

I understand 'bout wantin' to take a break ... I'm glad to hear you're OK and things are goin' well. I enjoyed the hugs ya' sent! HA! Take care. Jack C

Jack Clark

Date: 10/21/2014 10:54:00 AM

Hi Arlene ... I've seen no "new" entries bearing your name as the author. I pray you are alright. Hope everything in your world is coming up sunshine and roses. Jack C

Arlene Smith
Date: 10/21/2014 11:10:00 AM

Hey, buddy!... I am doing very well.. Just taking a break, I guess. I would like to mabey write more sometime. Not the contests, tho. Too much time congratulating and responding to comments... Hope you are doing well too!.. I WILL At least take time to do some reading from you and a few others. Stay cool! ... Hugs... Arlene

Robert Johnson

Date: 10/16/2014 7:19:00 PM

Leaves us to wonder which came first. :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 9/16/2014 12:37:00 AM

A fantastic haiku. But why the guilty face?. Fun to read and lovely that makes us smile. So nice to read u again.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/14/2014 3:16:00 AM

I love this Arlene....I am still smiling!

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/19/2014 5:41:00 PM

Nice Arlene... Verlena

Jack Horne

Date: 8/16/2014 5:35:00 PM

lol, love this witty haiku

Keith Merritt

Date: 8/16/2014 8:16:00 AM

A great n funny one, Arlene ! It seems to happen a lot in a marriage, huh ? Congrats on your win !

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/10/2014 2:46:00 PM

Witty first place win, Arlene. Good one.

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/9/2014 12:28:00 PM

grats on your win!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/9/2014 9:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your great win. I enjoyed reading this witty, humorous piece. Great write, Arlene! Pandita

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/8/2014 2:09:00 PM

huge congrats to you, Arlene... greeat!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/8/2014 11:34:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/8/2014 6:31:00 AM

Back again wid huge congrats on awesome win dear!

Mohan Chutani

Date: 8/8/2014 1:40:00 AM

congrats Arlene on a fine win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2014 12:52:00 AM

Nice aha moments of joy, Arlene. congrats

Craig Glenister

Date: 8/8/2014 12:23:00 AM

Made me laugh..congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2014 11:49:00 PM

THis one sticks in my mind the most from all the other AHA haiku I read. Congrats on a very well deserved win.

Tim Smith

Date: 8/7/2014 11:37:00 PM

Glad this one found the podium....congrats Tim

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/7/2014 11:35:00 PM

Nicely done... 1st place win! Congratulations!!! Verlena

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/4/2014 1:14:00 AM

Aha, sound good. Enjoyable haiku. Tfs

Arlene Smith
Date: 8/4/2014 6:35:00 AM

Thank you, dear Ravi!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Paul Callus

Date: 8/3/2014 3:47:00 PM

Aha! Arlene! He knows that you're going to ask for the keys to the motor, next:) Very enjoyable haiku! // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 8/8/2014 2:34:00 PM

...and back with merited congratulations!!!

Arlene Smith
Date: 8/4/2014 6:34:00 AM

Ha! You know it, my friend!.. :-) .. Hugs.. Arlene

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/2/2014 2:06:00 PM

fascinating!... your aha shows why you got those goodies... nice one, Arlene.. huggs

Arlene Smith
Date: 8/2/2014 5:28:00 PM

Thank you, sweet Nette!.. Hugs.. Arlene

John Pen

Date: 8/2/2014 2:02:00 AM

Just a coincidence........no relationship between the flowers and the boat lol

Arlene Smith
Date: 8/2/2014 2:07:00 AM

Duhh.. OK... Lol... Thanks for the visit, dear!.. Hugs.. Arlene