Aha

candy and flowers
guilty look on Hubby's face
new boat in driveway!



Contest: Haiku "aha" Moment
Sponsor: Regina Riddle

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Skat A

May 26, 2015 at 5:01 PM

lol, I bet you two will enjoy the fun afterwards. SK

Jack Clark

October 21, 2014 at 8:22 PM

I understand 'bout wantin' to take a break ... I'm glad to hear you're OK and things are goin' well. I enjoyed the hugs ya' sent! HA! Take care. Jack C

Jack Clark

October 21, 2014 at 10:54 AM

Hi Arlene ... I've seen no "new" entries bearing your name as the author. I pray you are alright. Hope everything in your world is coming up sunshine and roses. Jack C

Arlene Smith

October 21, 2014 at 11:10 AM

Hey, buddy!... I am doing very well.. Just taking a break, I guess. I would like to mabey write more sometime. Not the contests, tho. Too much time congratulating and responding to comments... Hope you are doing well too!.. I WILL At least take time to do some reading from you and a few others. Stay cool! ... Hugs... Arlene

Robert Johnson

October 16, 2014 at 7:19 PM

Leaves us to wonder which came first. :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

September 16, 2014 at 12:37 AM

A fantastic haiku. But why the guilty face?. Fun to read and lovely that makes us smile. So nice to read u again.

Connie Marcum Wong

September 14, 2014 at 3:16 AM

I love this Arlene....I am still smiling!

Verlena S. Walker

August 19, 2014 at 5:41 PM

Nice Arlene... Verlena

Jack Horne

August 16, 2014 at 5:35 PM

lol, love this witty haiku

Keith Merritt

August 16, 2014 at 8:16 AM

A great n funny one, Arlene ! It seems to happen a lot in a marriage, huh ? Congrats on your win !

Faye Gibson

August 10, 2014 at 2:46 PM

Witty first place win, Arlene. Good one.

Casarah Nance

August 9, 2014 at 12:28 PM

grats on your win!

Pandita Sietesantos

August 9, 2014 at 9:31 AM

Congratulations on your great win. I enjoyed reading this witty, humorous piece. Great write, Arlene! Pandita

Nette Onclaud

August 8, 2014 at 2:09 PM

huge congrats to you, Arlene... greeat!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 8, 2014 at 11:34 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 8, 2014 at 6:31 AM

Back again wid huge congrats on awesome win dear!

Mohan Chutani

August 8, 2014 at 1:40 AM

congrats Arlene on a fine win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 8, 2014 at 12:52 AM

Nice aha moments of joy, Arlene. congrats

Craig Glenister

August 8, 2014 at 12:23 AM

Made me laugh..congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

August 7, 2014 at 11:49 PM

THis one sticks in my mind the most from all the other AHA haiku I read. Congrats on a very well deserved win.

Tim Smith

August 7, 2014 at 11:37 PM

Glad this one found the podium....congrats Tim

Verlena S. Walker

August 7, 2014 at 11:35 PM

Nicely done... 1st place win! Congratulations!!! Verlena

Ravi Sathasivam

August 4, 2014 at 1:14 AM

Aha, sound good. Enjoyable haiku. Tfs

Arlene Smith

August 4, 2014 at 6:35 AM

Thank you, dear Ravi!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Paul Callus

August 3, 2014 at 3:47 PM

Aha! Arlene! He knows that you're going to ask for the keys to the motor, next:) Very enjoyable haiku! // paul

Paul Callus

August 8, 2014 at 2:34 PM

...and back with merited congratulations!!!

Arlene Smith

August 4, 2014 at 6:34 AM

Ha! You know it, my friend!.. :-) .. Hugs.. Arlene

Nette Onclaud

August 2, 2014 at 2:06 PM

fascinating!... your aha shows why you got those goodies... nice one, Arlene.. huggs

Arlene Smith

August 2, 2014 at 5:28 PM

Thank you, sweet Nette!.. Hugs.. Arlene

John Pen

August 2, 2014 at 2:02 AM

Just a coincidence........no relationship between the flowers and the boat lol

Arlene Smith

August 2, 2014 at 2:07 AM

Duhh.. OK... Lol... Thanks for the visit, dear!.. Hugs.. Arlene

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