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Ah Iris, What Do You See

there's a construction site close by, detour flag-man calling 'keep moving'... so iris and i day dream on the back deck.... ................................................. when breakfast, it's... butter-flies, and cheer-ups... sights, sounds and open windows... iris, my cat loves... to lay, across a warm... shoulder, sitting or standing... while, we sit on the deck... in, the early morn's air she... whiffs, stares and snuggles as... signs of what's out, there in... tree shadows, moving as they are... shadows of, dimensional reflections as... a fractal, a wave of movement that signifies… environmental change is due, and the numb-it pills... people take won't do much good so, eat proper and drink only... vegetable smoothies, and coffee to keep you awake while a cat like... iris keeps snuggling, friendship is beautiful but the blossom that is actually... my wife attracted an automaton bug, just social in nature but seeking flowers.. counted in hours in which seeing an infinity might be, hell as held-in-a-spell... it rests on my logic this is no more than a shadow of, dimensions available... an existent time-flow function called change is, an eternity available to... see into space-time matters, other than as being a sediment of... a flow called time, we are as creatures on 'flat-worlds' sea bed of logic... that matters because it is synonymously universally existent with fractal... logic...……………………………………………that well, iris what's say we go in for treats. stan sand

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Date: 7/2/2020 10:29:00 PM
Wow! When I sit outside thinking, my thoughts aren't nearly this deep. Seriously, this piece is very descriptive and thought-provoking. Janice
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Date: 7/3/2020 1:44:00 AM
...thing is my focus has been on a mathematics paper for the past year....i'm retired and it takes time....fractals symbolize a universal descriptive mathematics...macro and micro....eg. popcorn and atoms show similar number-constant values …….it's one way of having fun : ) stan sand
Date: 7/2/2020 9:44:00 AM
Our furry friends...gotta love them...for they love us unconditionally...nice write SB...best wishes...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 7/2/2020 11:04:00 AM
...iris is a...treasure...nothing but luv on four feet.... getting lost in my own thoughts is one thing but iris likes to be talked to quietly....about!?….whatever.... stan sand : )
Date: 7/2/2020 9:08:00 AM
thanks for the comment....I hardly got through the um...maze of it....myself.... iris is the friendliest old cat.....stan sand
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Date: 7/1/2020 10:21:00 PM
ahhh the ending was SO cute. Enough with the deep talk, let's just go for treats!! Good one, Sand blown
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