Ah Bus Wit No Windows

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I cannot believe what I just saw, naw a bus wit no windows? can this be a bus soley for the blind or could this be a new thought educational bus for those with eyes that see but their minds cannot so you don't need to ride a bus wit windows, the past events in your life shows mostly negativity, no insight on how you might make your life one of purpose no you just been sightseeing. so you and you and hey you over there wit yo pants hangin down below your butt, pull your pants up and climb on up on this bus, close your eyes and think Change, you should have had enough of sightseeing and you still cant see daylight and it shows so ride this bus wit no windows.

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Skat A

Date: 6/27/2015 1:32:00 AM

Monty, Congratulations on having your poem featured this past week. SKAT love

Monty Rocke
Date: 6/27/2015 1:41:00 PM

thank you very much,your encouragement and support are greatly appreciated, monty

Skat A

Date: 6/5/2015 1:16:00 AM

Hello Monty, that's got a twist. I like it, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Monty Rocke
Date: 6/5/2015 12:56:00 PM

thank you SKAT A, I welcome your support/montyrocke stage name: unconcious

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/5/2015 12:06:00 AM

Monty, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Monty Rocke
Date: 6/5/2015 12:13:00 AM

thanks Linda, I am getting good vibes already, will be speaking at an event tomorrow evening at 7617 S. Crenshaw Blvd, los angeles..would like to get some feedback from my new poem ain't seed nuthin at the top of the poetry videos at youtube.com/user/montyrocke.

Monty Rocke

Date: 6/5/2015 12:06:00 AM

my onstage poet name is unconcious, have two poetry cds at cdbaby.com there are several poetry videos at youtube.com/user/montyrocke this particular poems's inspiration came from I actually one day saw ah bus wit no windows. enjoy!