Sara Kendrick Poet Blitz

Agony of Suicide

Death by suicide
Death in agony
Agony of poison
Agony as emotions race

Race through organs
Race through minds
Mind tortured
Mind destroyed

Child without a mother
Child in tears
Tears flow
Tears remain

Remain insecurities
Remain fears
Fears torment
Fears hold captive

Captive to separations
Captive to uncertainty
Uncertainty of life
Uncertainty of love

Love evaporates
Love uplifts
Uplifts in thoughts
Uplifts in deeds

Deeds done
Deeds good or bad
Bad action
Bad examples

Examples of adults
Examples of illness 
Illness overwhelms
Illness destroys

Destroys humble home
Destroys reputation
Reputation disappears
Reputation negative

Negative example
Negative life
Life wiped out
Life cut short

Short of joy
Short of hope
Hope disappears
Hope not suicide

Suicide changed all
Suicide annihilated
Annihilated 
All 

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Anne-Lise Andresen September 15, 2015 at 6:32 AM - All this is part of our life ...... a great poem, Sara! - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen September 14, 2015 at 5:13 PM What a well and a beautiful write..... I love how it was constructed and the truth of life within........A.M.

Anu Nayak September 13, 2015 at 12:53 AM Dear Sara, beautifully constructed Blitz....reader gets the feel of agony and the fear of tarnishing reputation...there are lot of painful emotions in it...expressing through the choice of your words....loads of live, Anu:-) Anu Nayak September 13, 2015 at 12:54 AM Loads of love*