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Aging Woes

Forgetful moments, hair thinning, Memories fading, ears ringing, Hands wrinkled, boobs drooping, Knees weak, words looping, Silver top, hot flushing, Bladder weakness, loo rushing, Bones tired, sleeping less, Couldn’t care, such a mess, Eyes blurring, tummy tucks, Getting older, really sucks.

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Date: 1/28/2024 4:36:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 7/13/2023 12:49:00 PM
Wow..wow! Brilliant! You have so lyrically described the woes of aging! The rhyme was outstanding! I simply loved your poem! More strength to you and your writing!
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Date: 7/13/2023 9:42:00 PM
Thank you, a bit of aging humor. :)
Date: 7/13/2023 10:56:00 AM
Oh, how I love this! Don't feel alone, my friend. As I like to say keep on keepin' on.
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Date: 7/13/2023 9:45:00 PM
Thank you, here's to Keepin' on. :P
Date: 7/13/2023 7:30:00 AM
I love - Aging Woes - great smooth read - loads of imagery too! Thank You - Good Luck & stay safe too!
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Date: 7/13/2023 9:46:00 PM
Thank you Perry. :)
Date: 7/12/2023 5:02:00 PM
Nice one! I wrote a similar one called "The Alternative" https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_alternative_1415370
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Date: 7/13/2023 9:47:00 PM
Just read it, a bit of aging humor too, good one. :D
Date: 6/29/2022 6:27:00 AM
Love this. Dave
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Date: 7/13/2023 9:48:00 PM
Thanks Dave :)
Date: 1/11/2022 10:58:00 AM
But you can not die until the medical profession have drained your bank account! Aloha!
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Date: 7/13/2023 9:44:00 PM
haha, that's why I stay away from them. :P

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