Pivotal Poetry Poet Rhyme

Aging Woes

Forgetful moments, hair thinning,
Memories fading, ears ringing,
Hands wrinkled, boobs drooping,
Knees weak, words looping,
Silver top, hot flushing,
Bladder weakness, loo rushing,
Bones tired, sleeping less,
Couldn’t care, such a mess,
Eyes blurring, tummy tucks,
Getting older, really sucks.

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Beata Agustin January 28, 2024 at 4:36 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Ramanan Duraiswami July 13, 2023 at 12:49 PM Wow..wow! Brilliant! You have so lyrically described the woes of aging! The rhyme was outstanding! I simply loved your poem! More strength to you and your writing! Pivotal Poetry July 13, 2023 at 9:42 PM Thank you, a bit of aging humor. :)

Franci Hoffman July 13, 2023 at 10:56 AM Oh, how I love this! Don't feel alone, my friend. As I like to say keep on keepin' on. Pivotal Poetry July 13, 2023 at 9:45 PM Thank you, here's to Keepin' on. :P

Perry Campanella July 13, 2023 at 7:30 AM I love - Aging Woes - great smooth read - loads of imagery too! Thank You - Good Luck & stay safe too! Pivotal Poetry July 13, 2023 at 9:46 PM Thank you Perry. :)

Frederick Leeper July 12, 2023 at 5:02 PM Nice one! I wrote a similar one called "The Alternative" https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_alternative_1415370 Pivotal Poetry July 13, 2023 at 9:47 PM Just read it, a bit of aging humor too, good one. :D

Dave Cox June 29, 2022 at 6:27 AM Love this. Dave Pivotal Poetry July 13, 2023 at 9:48 PM Thanks Dave :)

Rico Leffanta January 11, 2022 at 10:58 AM But you can not die until the medical profession have drained your bank account! Aloha! Pivotal Poetry July 13, 2023 at 9:44 PM haha, that's why I stay away from them. :P