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Crappy, crepey skin What a shape I'm in Is it inherited though Watch out daughters for The warning signs or It will slip up on you so Fast as speeding car Superman by far Get on it keep it at bay Whom am I kidding There is no ridding Age comes and steals youth away

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Date: 12/24/2024 10:39:00 PM
A very easy one for us older folks to relate to. Second stanza for real!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/25/2024 3:09:00 AM
Andrea, yes, age takes its toll, God's love is bold even though we have aches, pains, and wrinkles. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Date: 12/5/2024 3:51:00 PM
And good 'ol arthritis has a field day on a lot of us too. My knees creak the an old house's front door, lol! I know another elderly person who had knee replacement surgery a few years ago and she told me it hasn't helped much. Excellent penning with a humorous flair on the aging process, Sara. Hope your Yuletide is bright and festive.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/6/2024 3:23:00 AM
Regina, my husband had knee replacement surgery and it took it a long time to heal, etc. but he is fine with it now plus he has had both hips replaced. Some people feel it is the best thing after it gets healed completely because the pain is gone. Thank you for dropping by and I hope this holiday season is awesome one for you. Sara K
Date: 12/4/2024 12:28:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun write with a great/true ending. Age is just a number.... Have a fun day writing away............
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/4/2024 1:20:00 PM
Paula, yes, age is just a number. Some people seem to not age as fast or as bad as others. I hope you are one that doesn't age as fast or as bad. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Date: 12/1/2024 10:44:00 PM
Hi Sara, I know all of us want to be slim and trim, but others are overweight, they don't age so quickly in looks, health is another thing though, as they carry more weight and that is duly paid for also. We can't win! Hugs and blessings, Jenny.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/2/2024 4:33:00 AM
Well, Jennifer, I have noticed that sometimes those that try to stay on a lower fat diet that their skin seems to age faster for some reason. I have never tried to stay slim, but my weight has been up and down which is not good for a person either. Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara K
Date: 11/30/2024 5:32:00 AM
Dear sara, i can imagine how age can come and how it can steal the youth away. Youv written a very heartfelt poem on this subject. Pleasure reading your work always. Sending you light
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/30/2024 6:00:00 AM
Yes, age slips up and steals youth away, IE. Your visits are always uplifting and encouraging. Sara K
Date: 11/28/2024 7:37:00 PM
Enjoyed this highly humorous poem. With age, the changes in skin cannot be prevented. Genetic factors contribute to a great extent. Whatever it is, wrinkles , however can't be prevented. As long as you have a youthful mind, don't worry about aging, dear Sara. This poem is testimony to your young mind.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/29/2024 1:27:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa, for the comment about testimony of my young mind. Yes, I think genetics and exposure to excessive sunlight does it damage plus age is going to happen if we keep on living. Sara K
Date: 11/25/2024 6:29:00 AM
Hi Sara, this is a beautiful piece, nicely put. I wish they would come up with a potion, to vanish those aging spots. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/25/2024 7:41:00 AM
Zyrool, well there is something that will help the age spots, so they say but I don't think there is for the crepey skin except to have cosmetic surgery which is too dangerous. Thanks for stopping by . Sara K
Date: 11/22/2024 12:21:00 PM
Tell me about it. My back problems are hitting me hard.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/22/2024 1:22:00 PM
I can say I understand about back problems, John. I have had two spinal surgeries. Not very much fun. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K
Date: 11/20/2024 8:17:00 AM
Hi Sara, they do say beauty is within, growing old is something we can't avoid. Xx
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/20/2024 10:58:00 AM
Yes, John, if we live long enough, we will eventually age. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K
Date: 11/18/2024 4:10:00 AM
a smile for me, better accept aging to diminish the effects, thanks for the touching poem poet Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/18/2024 4:13:00 AM
Yes, mostly I do accept aging. However, it is taking its toll on everything. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Date: 11/17/2024 11:39:00 PM
Beautiful indeed always makes you think. That's forsure thank you for sharing Duncan
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/18/2024 4:04:00 AM
Beauty is not lasting but a deep gentle soul's spirit is. Thanks for the visit, Duncan. I appreciate the kind review. Sara K
Date: 11/17/2024 8:30:00 PM
What a beauty you have painted in these realistic lines dear friend Sara. "Get on it keep it at bay . Whom am I kidding . There is no ridding Age comes and steals youth away" . We all know this and face this hard reality of life sometimes with a smile on our face and mind and often with a sadness which deepens due to our relations and other circumstances. With love and best wishes always...Ravindra
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/18/2024 4:03:00 AM
Why, thank you, Ravindra. I appreciate the visit and kind review. Thanks for the best wishes and love. Sara K

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