Aging - Tanka

autumn’s rusty ghosts
haunt the naked cherry trees – 
memories of fruits...
torpid mists enshroud the sun
with prophecies of winter...
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June 7, 2010 at 9:12 AM
I see the weekend brought a lot of inspiration to all PoetrySoup Poets. I enjoyed reading you poetry today Liliana. Love, Carol
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June 6, 2010 at 12:22 PM
Love this write.. so well written
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